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Mar 12, 2010 03:01

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shiny_miranda March 12 2010, 11:50:26 UTC
Omg, *dies*

*loves you* <3

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drugsex March 13 2010, 17:15:01 UTC
yay ty for reading!

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shiny_miranda March 14 2010, 00:15:12 UTC
THANKYOU FOR WRITING!

I was kinda in a daze before, so I didn't really leave a proper comment, lolol.
A daze induced by the awesomeness of your JongHo.
But yes, it was amazing and awesome and please write more.

<3

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hanjongkey March 12 2010, 15:29:44 UTC
LoVe it it it it ah~ oh oh oh jongho saranghae! ah ah ah ah Jongkey manhi manhihae!xxD... I love Jongho hate-love story!xxDD.. and these days, eventhought my 1st otp is jongkey, I like Jongho's skinsip better!xxD..

you need to write another one!xxD

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drugsex March 13 2010, 17:16:10 UTC
yah i kinda love that song too haha thank you for reading and commenting!

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paranoiascreams March 12 2010, 17:08:57 UTC
THE SEXUAL TENSION WAS SO UNBEARABLE I CAN FEEL MY GUT HURTING. i swear. why did those three come?! XD

......

OK. so the unending sneaky sexual moments are the result of the tension those three gave them? WOW. that's some suppressed feelings.

and i love this. it's so hot. smut and fluff. lovely.

and i thought they'd just end up friends with lots and lots of benefits, im happy with the ending. it was really cute.

thanks for sharing, it was a good read. (i cant write smut for the life of me, so all i can was to read.)

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drugsex March 13 2010, 17:17:22 UTC
urm i wou;dnt say that the sexual tension was caused by the other three but yah it was certttainly exacerbated i guess? thank you for reading and commenting! :)))))

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nuile March 12 2010, 20:16:41 UTC
I can't describe what this fic did to me.
I had to make a great deal of pauses while reading. I kept forgetting to breath.
I think it's deep. Smutty and confusing but... ah. No usual 'happy end', no 'normal' confessions (because... WHAT confessions, seriously?). It's unique. *_*

rominho and jonghyunette
That was total win xDDD I laughed so hard! Which was good since the tension from the previous part was sorta strong ^=^

Thank you for making my night.

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drugsex March 13 2010, 17:19:26 UTC
omg hahah thanks for thinking it was deep bc i tried to make it like ~teenage feelings deep and not like ~philosopher deep and i l;iek ended up with porn but thank you for taking the time to read and comment!

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xxqod March 12 2010, 22:12:21 UTC
All the insecurities included in this make it seem so much more real than when everything would go nicely and without any bumps along the way.

Love their competition with each other and the unspoken mockery that's going on.

Snarky remarks for the win XD It was full of it and I liked it (being a little sadistic)

<3 ~~

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drugsex March 13 2010, 17:20:30 UTC
yayyy boys and insecurities! thank you for taking the time to read and comment! :))

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