oh my god shrieking this is so fucking good. I have been craving some good jongho for ages and this is like, answering my prayers kdjgldfg. your jonghyun and minho are so great on their own, and then when they're together I don't even. I love the way you portrayed their dynamic. and there was HYUKHAE for like a moment but STILL. basically, I want to marry you and marry your brain and marry your comedic timing. um. crawls away awkwardly.
"fine i will. but do you even know how many girls would kill to be where you are right now? next to a naked kim jonghyun? just, you know. food for thought." "how would you feel if i jerked off onto your pillow? next to the face of a sleeping kim jonghyun? just, you know. food for thought." "...alright, fine. i get it."
"i'm trying to get more definition on my internal obliques," he says, lifting up his shirt so it bunches up around his armpits, and looks back up at minho to make sure he's paying attention before he continues, "girls totally dig abs."
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omg thank you im gl;ad thje dynamic worke dfor you! also the humor too i guess because its definitely a little more overt than i usually write and yes the hyukhae! ty so much for taking the time to read and commenting! :))
sljdfs i got so excited when nautisch told me that you'd posted fic! and jongho, at that. :3 i loved the progression of their relationship and how they stayed stupid and competitive even when they were like, jerking each other off jsldjf. a+, seriously. and the ending! sobs i thought it was really great and appropriate and :3-inducing, idk. and i love the way you write taem, and your jinki is hilarious. :3
"you can take my juice, choi minho, but you can't take my dignity." way to take a stand, jjong.
"it's okay, hyung. we all have shortcomings. it's a pity, though, that you have to deal with both an altitude deficit and a small-" LOL minho you bitch.
"wait, hyung. before you go, you've got a little, uh, something on your cheek." "what?" jonghyun turns around and walks to the bathroom mirror. "wait what- is this- ugh GROSS." snorts.
and then the scene with the "ignoring" and the hypothetical fucking and the subtext with the dvd. nnngh i just really loved this overall. tysm for writing it :) ♥
yayyyy jongho & id o believe that you wrote a pretty nice one yourself iirc and srsly their entire appea l is like how stupid they both are its so great!!! tysm for reading and commenting! :))
haha, wow i really enjoyed this. their interactions seem very natural to me; i'm so glad you honed in on all the awkwardness (often hilarious awkwardness) of it as well as the ~sexy rowr~ moments. and oh my goodness the interaction between onew and taemin! loved it! they really do communicate well, i feel, so that was a perfect detail to use for advancing the plot and heightening the comedy. and looololol eunhae cameo was great. thank you for sharing! ♥
omg i embraced the awk super hard hahah so im glad it worked for you!! and im happy you liked the onew taemin dynamic too, thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!
Fuck, that was beautiful. I like it when a story makes me want to never reach the bottom page. This definitely will be a rec for me. My favorite part was the gym scene:
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"fine i will. but do you even know how many girls would kill to be where you are right now? next to a naked kim jonghyun? just, you know. food for thought."
"how would you feel if i jerked off onto your pillow? next to the face of a sleeping kim jonghyun? just, you know. food for thought."
"...alright, fine. i get it."
"i'm trying to get more definition on my internal obliques," he says, lifting up his shirt so it bunches up around his armpits, and looks back up at minho to make sure he's paying attention before he continues, "girls totally dig abs."
jonghyun straightens and dusts off the front of ( ... )
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"you can take my juice, choi minho, but you can't take my dignity."
way to take a stand, jjong.
"it's okay, hyung. we all have shortcomings. it's a pity, though, that you have to deal with both an altitude deficit and a small-"
LOL minho you bitch.
"wait, hyung. before you go, you've got a little, uh, something on your cheek."
"what?" jonghyun turns around and walks to the bathroom mirror. "wait what- is this- ugh GROSS."
snorts.
and then the scene with the "ignoring" and the hypothetical fucking and the subtext with the dvd. nnngh i just really loved this overall. tysm for writing it :) ♥
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Yeah...I am spreading this story like herpes.
NICE. VERY NICE.
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I like it when a story makes me want to never reach the bottom page.
This definitely will be a rec for me.
My favorite part was the gym scene:
"you could, if you want".
I just about died.
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