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Sarah - Chapter II

Jan 16, 2004 00:03

Sarah spent the remainder of the day hiding. From everyone. It was all too much to deal with. Zoe was now much more than a mere fantasy, she was real, and she had kissed me, Sarah thought. What now? Everything was different. Before there were no worries and everything was harmless. But now Sarah had an actual person she fantasized about. Real flesh ( Read more... )

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in the words of joe "that's hot!" jayne_broken January 16 2004, 11:10:25 UTC

beautiful....plain and simple.

you are so awesome!

by the way...i remembered that writers name for about a week...and then it just flew away out of my head....could you refresh me, doll?

Re: in the words of joe "that's hot!" druidmusiclove January 16 2004, 23:24:01 UTC

awe hunny, your so sweet. i'm glad people are reading it. did you catch the first chapter too? i think when its done, if its good enough, i want to put it in the spork. or do you think its too risque for that? if it is, whitch one of my "works" would you say i should attemt to put into the spork mag? i'd love your feedback doll. oh and her name is Patricia A. McKillip. find her, read her, there awesome. i'm also looking for a new book and a new autor, any recomendations?
love ya!

Re: in the words of joe "that's hot!" jayne_broken January 17 2004, 17:06:30 UTC

yes, i caught the first chapter...it was totally awesome as well. I love how it left me hanging.
I think any one of your poems could be submitted to spork....you're an awesome writer (we can smell our own :P)...speaking of which, i havent written anything in a really long time. I really should get to that but my creativity factor is really on the down low. *Sigh*
oh well.

THANK YOU, by the way.....i'm really going to have to find something by Patricia.

*A MILLION HUGS*

Re: in the words of joe "that's hot!" druidmusiclove January 19 2004, 02:43:15 UTC

Meditation. It's awesome for inspiration. Sex too... Good movies inspire me too. And there's always the standby's like ex bf's. (my personal favorite) Hey, do you have a number I'd be able to reach you at? We should hang out more often. Love ya, hope to see you soon.
*millions of hugs back*

mychemicalromeo January 17 2004, 00:38:13 UTC

great story, but the lesbianism made me twitch, just to let you know that if i didnt love you so much, i would have never read a word
(but it was really good)