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Dec 05, 2005 19:57

me and my gf argue over who loves each other more so i decided to try to say how much i love her in a poem... but this feeble language doesnt have enough words to describe it, but i gave it my best ( Read more... )

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musicaltears07 December 6 2005, 02:46:53 UTC
beaten....

boy i cant even begin to say
how youre making such a huge mistake
you know i obviously love you more
dont tell me im wrong, cuz im quite sure
i love you more than i love this life
i love you more than the sweetest rhymes
i love you more than i could possibly explain
ill try my best, but it will end in vain
for i know that no matter how hard i try
i could never find any words to describe
the love i have inside for you
and how i know for sure this is true
and also think that it was meant to be this way
were so far apart while everyone says
how they dont think we can make it last
but they wouldnt know anything about that
i think its this way because we have to prove
we have to prove that what we've got is true

ok that went on a litle longer than i had hoped, but there it is. face defeat. <3

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drummer_poet December 6 2005, 02:54:01 UTC
plz, tomorrow, ill have u beaten down....

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musicaltears07 December 6 2005, 03:00:38 UTC
tomorrow....only in ur dreams....u just cant deny the truth, love. soon u will see.

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drummer_poet December 6 2005, 03:03:38 UTC
ok, bring it, tomorrow, lay down your best, but in the end, the truth will out shine your lies, the truth is i love u more and u will soon see

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