scribbling in the back row

[drumoflife]

I wrote a couple of poems spontaneously in class the other day when I was REAL tired (I was in a lecture-hall . . . I wouldn't be rude enough to do that in a classroom where it is more noticeable). I think they are kinda cool but I am unsure whether I should record them in my *good* notebook, because they seem pretty nightmarish and perhaps even

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[controlledfreak]

I like them. I never know how to give feedback, but I say the first one is pretty good. :) Have a good one.

[drumoflife]

oops.

sorrry kippy! it is a little hilarious but I really didn't mean to ignore you like that. now it is months later and I barely even touch that notebook anymore . . . well if I ever want to I can record that first one too since it is online and I'm pretty sure the system isn't gonna crash anytime soon.

take care!

[thenarwalspeaks]

keep em.

[drumoflife]

the results are in. I have decided I will keep only the second one, cos the first one is too damn negative and just doesn't sound very pleasing . . .

btw there is actually a third one that removed before posting them, simply cos it REALLY sucks. so there's one out of three. after all, I wrote them on the spot and neither of them seem THAT good . . .