alrighty, well I'm considered a pretty smart guy.. and I didnt really get what that was about.. I really dont want to be mean, but it sounds like you were just really pissed off, and you threw a bunch of random big words in there to hide it.
if that offends you that much, sorrie. just try to think of it like, I'm a really picky guy when it comes to writing.. and I've never been much of a fan for freeform.
I'm sure it mean's a million things to you, and I can dig that.. but it doesnt add up to me, other than the fact that it's all poisted towards the same context.. which seems more deppressing than anything.. * shrug * like I said, I'm not the best guy to critique YOUR work. most of mine is usually spoken in riddles, painting pretty images in your head, even if you cant solve the paradox.
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alrighty, well I'm considered a pretty smart guy.. and I didnt really get what that was about.. I really dont want to be mean, but it sounds like you were just really pissed off, and you threw a bunch of random big words in there to hide it.
if that offends you that much, sorrie. just try to think of it like, I'm a really picky guy when it comes to writing.. and I've never been much of a fan for freeform.
I'm sure it mean's a million things to you, and I can dig that.. but it doesnt add up to me, other than the fact that it's all poisted towards the same context.. which seems more deppressing than anything.. * shrug * like I said, I'm not the best guy to critique YOUR work. most of mine is usually spoken in riddles, painting pretty images in your head, even if you cant solve the paradox.
haha! what?! you told me to read it!
- max
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That line is so powerful. I'm glad you chose to let it stand on its own.
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