Okay, I've been going through the archives of one of the communities that I follow and catching up on stories that were posted previously. I found one that had an interesting premise but the execution was not the best. The writing wasn't the greatest in my opinion but what really bothered me was the beta job was awful
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Otherwise, I'd stick to the basic rules for ConCrit. Concrit is the best way to comment in these situations, IMHO. heh heh heh. Humble.
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So, if you feel the need to post, I would do the "things I found distracting/off-putting, then the things you actually liked. try to keep the lists of similar length to not discourage budding authors, 'cause we could use more, not less, and everyone can be taught to be a decent, if not absolutely stellar, writer.
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Also, you being humble demands the bullshit flag. A big gi-normous honking bullshit flag. Just saying.
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I don't really know this author so I don't know if she could take it as a reflection of the work or if she would take it personally and I don't want to start a little pissed off fest so I'm going to let it go.
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