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DS Badfic Challenge 2: When Secret Worlds Collide by Nora Bombay

Sep 07, 2009 20:32

Second Due South Badfic Challenge by Nora Bombay

Title: When Secret Worlds Collide.
Author: norabombay and special guests to be mentioned in the footnotes.
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski, Kowalski/Frannie, Diefenbaker/Pastry, Chicago/Cubs, Cubs Fans/Beer
Rating: PG
Word Count: About 2100
Warnings: Bad writing. Bad grammar. Bad spelling. Crying. Fake sibling ( Read more... )

badfic challenge 2

Comments 22

brigantine September 8 2009, 23:00:08 UTC

BWAHAHAHAA! *falls over*

This is truly, truly horrific! Seriously, I don't even know where to begin. Just... Hee! \o/

norabombay September 12 2009, 02:25:21 UTC

I'm glad you appreciate the glory and horror!

plotbunniofdoom September 9 2009, 12:39:31 UTC

lol

That ending . . .

xD

norabombay September 12 2009, 02:23:06 UTC

If 35 year old men can't lock themselves into police station bathrooms and ritually cut? WHo can?

wihluta September 9 2009, 16:06:34 UTC

Ray rubbed his eyebrow, the symbol for "I love you my snuggle bunny" in Fraserese.
Now that explains SO MUCH!

Because no matter what happened, Ray knew he could never disappoint anyone when he was down there on his knees.
*cackles*

norabombay September 12 2009, 02:22:39 UTC

I'm glad you like the knees. I was especially proud of that part :)

moosesal September 9 2009, 21:47:53 UTC

I'm kind of terrified by the idea of Fraser as a naked Marilla. Just... *bleaches brain*

Perfectly awful.

norabombay September 12 2009, 02:22:16 UTC

Thank you. Sadly, I've been utterly unable to remove the image from my head. It pains me.

bluebrocade September 22 2009, 03:50:53 UTC

Haha. Awesomely bad!

That Turnbull had purchased his pair in early August when the shelves were full was probably best kept a secret. But he told it anyway.

<3

Anne of Green Gables. Gilbert Blythe! I'm DYING. Brilliant and hilarious.

Fraser gave ray an apologetic look, one that said "my love, I cannot bear to be separated from you for but a moment- however, I am under orders".

"I love you my snuggle bunny"

OMG you have such amazing Fraser & Ray voices! ;D

Because no matter what happened, Ray knew he could never disappoint anyone when he was down there on his knees.

Of COURSE not. :D

And that time they were in the back ground of the local news, half naked, well, everyone had certainly believed them that Ray was just looking for ticks.

ROTFLMAO.

Bravo!

norabombay September 22 2009, 04:45:56 UTC

I'm glad you appreciated the horror- I had a lot of fun with this. And his boots bear a distinctive similarity to the icon use are using (whichis awesome)

I'm glad the dialog "authenticity" worked for you!