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The Penguin Challenge by exbex

Oct 03, 2009 21:10

Title: Epiphanies
Author: exbex
Pairing: Ray/Ray
Word Count: 855
Notes: Yes, shot glasses. Bear with me. ( Epiphanies )

Comments 17

bradygirl_12 October 4 2009, 04:31:36 UTC

Nice! I love Ray/Ray stories and this one was in their voices all the way.

The penguin references...good use of the challenge! LOL!

exbex October 4 2009, 05:22:33 UTC

:D Thanks for reading and complimenting. Yeah, the penguin thing was a stretch, but I am completely obsessed with Ray/Ray, seeing as they're perfect for each other (at least in my torrid imagination), and will use any excuse to write them ;)

puckling October 4 2009, 07:38:21 UTC

Oh this is lovely. &hearts

exbex October 4 2009, 08:12:29 UTC

*g* Thank you; glad you liked.

akite October 4 2009, 11:50:49 UTC

Awww...though, I can see that row of shot glasses now because, guys + heart-to-heart talks = not happening in my experience. *g*

exbex October 4 2009, 19:04:13 UTC

Yeah, originally there was no conversation starting shot glass in this fic, but it didn't seem entirely authentic ;)

mizface October 4 2009, 12:16:49 UTC

Very nice! I love that RayK has a book of notes about Vecchio. And this part was very funny and perfectly them:

“It’s an anniversary. Not our anniversary, I mean. It’s been one year since I got back from Vegas and you and Benny blew my cover and then ran off to your Canadian gay love nest and left me laying in the hospital.”

Ray furrowed his eyebrows, looked at the Welcome to Las Vegas shot glass in his hand, then back at Vecchio indignantly. “Vecchio, you weren’t left laying in the hospital. You ran off to Florida with my wife and opened a bowling alley. And Fraser and I were looking for the Hand of Franklin, you prick.”

“Ex-wife, and the Hand of Franklin wasn’t in Fraser’s ass. Anyway, not the point. The point is…”

exbex October 4 2009, 19:06:06 UTC

Kowalski with notes about the object of his affection seemed fitting ;)

I was a little nervous that Vecchio's line there would be too crude; I'm glad you liked it :D

mizface October 5 2009, 01:37:15 UTC

oh no, not too crude - that line made me laugh out loud

almightychrissy October 4 2009, 15:17:55 UTC

So much love! Awww, boys. So sweet.

exbex October 4 2009, 19:07:17 UTC

*g* Thanks. Your userpic is greatness :D

almightychrissy October 4 2009, 19:25:35 UTC

Thank you! I love Ray's glasses.