9:23 a.m., NC-17 [butter challenge by elementalv]

Nov 29, 2009 16:15

Title: 9:23 a.m.
Author: elementalv
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Kowalski/Fraser
Notes: 1,570 words or thereabouts of sex, which is - never mind. That’s in the territory of TMI.
Summary: Ray is, frankly, fucking desperate. Or desperate for fucking.

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9:23 a.m. )

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galenlisle November 30 2009, 00:20:35 UTC
A perfect Sunday afternoon read! I love Ray's internal frenetic monologue and the dialogue between him and Fraser is as good as the sex. Poor Fraser, with his failed single entendres!

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elementalv November 30 2009, 11:36:01 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked this little tour through Ray's brain.

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spuffyduds November 30 2009, 00:34:51 UTC
Whoof, I love this Fraser--slightly obnoxious in bed, with a hint of maybe-even-somewhat-dark domination games going on.

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elementalv November 30 2009, 11:36:45 UTC
Fraser is a control freak in so, SO many ways that I don't really see that going away in bed. Glad you liked this version of him.

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akite November 30 2009, 00:54:08 UTC
This story is certainly hot enough to melt butter. I like a Ray with only two brain cells to work together.

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elementalv November 30 2009, 11:37:40 UTC
I have to say that a Ray with only two brain cells to rub together is very definitely a fun Ray to play with.

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wihluta November 30 2009, 19:24:05 UTC
Holy mother of guh.

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elementalv December 1 2009, 11:19:16 UTC
Thank you!

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tinzelda December 3 2009, 04:10:22 UTC
Fraser can even turn being a control freak into something hot! This was very well done.

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elementalv December 3 2009, 10:36:31 UTC
That's our boy in all his glory. And thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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