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Age challenge by Prudence Dearly

Mar 14, 2010 11:44

Title: Old Timer
Author: prudence_dearly
Word count: 716
Summary: Their age is beginning to tell.
Warnings: Light angst.
A/N: Thanks to akamine_chan for an excellent beta.

( Old Timer )

age challenge

Comments 25

thursdaynext_27 March 13 2010, 23:49:30 UTC

You really packed an emotional punch with these.

prudence_dearly March 14 2010, 18:26:31 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting!

exbex March 14 2010, 01:01:49 UTC

Oh, that hurts in the best way possible.

prudence_dearly March 14 2010, 18:28:04 UTC

*readjusts attitude to pain* Um. Good? I'm so not used to writing angst. But hey, if you liked it, then good :)

athousanderrors March 14 2010, 11:03:58 UTC

Oh, ouch. Lovely, and painful in the best possible way.

prudence_dearly March 14 2010, 18:28:33 UTC

Thanks. (I'm loving your icon, btw)

how_obscure March 14 2010, 15:13:29 UTC

I don't even know what to say. You wrote each one so in character and believable. It's depressing to read what, realistically, would start happening to some of our favorite characters. Well done.

prudence_dearly March 14 2010, 18:28:52 UTC

Thank you so much.

andeincascade March 14 2010, 17:48:20 UTC

*sob* They're alone.

*goes off to whimper in the corner*

prudence_dearly March 14 2010, 18:30:50 UTC

I'm a complete wuss. When beta'ing, Aka pointed me towards being more explicit about their aloneness but... I just couldn't. They're alone in these particular moments. I don't have the heart to go beyond that.

akamine_chan March 16 2010, 00:38:53 UTC

It's because I love the angst. *g*