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Chase challenge: "Not That Kind Of Out" by Luzula

Apr 16, 2010 09:19

Title: Not That Kind Of Out
Author: luzula
Pairing: Frannie/Elaine, with background F/K/V
Rating: PG
Length: 1400 words
Summary: Elaine and Frannie, flirting in a bar.
Notes: Thanks to spuffyduds for a quick beta! This little story started its life as a stop_drop_porn contribution, but I just couldn't get them into bed quickly enough.

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primroseburrows April 17 2010, 10:22:09 UTC

I don't know which makes me happier, Frannie and Elaine finding each other or Frannie becoming a cop (or hmm, maybe F/K/V because yay, OT3!).

luzula April 17 2010, 12:45:57 UTC

Well, I'm glad it made you happy, at any rate! And yeah, the F/K/V in the background kind of sneaked in--I didn't plan it.

primroseburrows April 17 2010, 23:24:57 UTC

All of it makes me very happy! :D

endcredits April 17 2010, 10:29:14 UTC

This is adorable! ♥

luzula April 17 2010, 12:46:08 UTC

Thank you!

meresy April 17 2010, 21:04:47 UTC

♥!

luzula April 17 2010, 21:33:01 UTC

Awww, thanks!

mergatrude April 19 2010, 03:04:29 UTC

Yay! This is lovely!

luzula April 19 2010, 08:11:46 UTC

Thank you!

kill_claudio April 20 2010, 18:54:23 UTC

Aaaw, Frannie and Elaine! ♥♥♥ I especially loved the drunk guy - Frannie and Elaine would absolutely be able to repel him with the power of their stares. I wish I could do that. And Elaine reassuring Frannie about her hat! I say again: Aaaaaw!

luzula April 21 2010, 11:28:25 UTC

Yay, thank you! I'm glad the drunk guy worked--I thought for a while that maybe I was going too far in the direction of stereotype there--but yeah, stuff like that happens. And it was fun to write a new pairing.