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Silence challenge: "Communication", by Luzula

Jun 13, 2010 20:48

Title: Communication
Author: Luzula
Characters: Fraser and Dief gen
Rating: G
Length: 1100 words
Summary: Dief wasn't quite like other wolves.
Notes: Thanks to mizface for the helpful beta!

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Comments 39

love_jackianto June 13 2010, 19:18:51 UTC

Oh that was wonderful! I love seeing Dief's back story.

luzula June 13 2010, 20:14:40 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, I realized I'd never written any Dief backstory.

akite June 13 2010, 19:37:59 UTC

♥ Of course Fraser would think that hats are eminently sensible apparel.

luzula June 13 2010, 20:14:56 UTC

Glad you liked that line!

csad21 June 13 2010, 20:01:08 UTC

"Perhaps I do have a partner, after all," I said. "I certainly seem to work better with you than with my previous one."

Dief whined softly, as if in agreement.

Very sweet, but still a bit heartbreaking between the lines. Oh, Fraser...

luzula June 13 2010, 20:29:07 UTC

Yes, that's pretty much what I was going for--thank you!

exbex June 13 2010, 20:10:54 UTC

*pets both Fraser and Dief* I love to see how this relationship formed; nicely done.

luzula June 14 2010, 08:22:34 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked it!

mamaffy June 13 2010, 21:35:51 UTC

Nice! Smart Dief. And the first steps of Fraser-Dief conversations.

He didn't dignify that with an answer, and indeed, I could figure it out for myself.
*loves*

luzula June 14 2010, 08:23:11 UTC

Yes, I was wondering how Dief first started talking to Fraser, and this story is the result. Glad you liked it!