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mizface June 29 2010, 22:36:15 UTC
Gorgeous world you've created, and I echo the sentiment of wanting more. There was so much to love, and it was all so interesting and felt very fleshed out.

Wonderful piece of writing, luz!

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luzula June 30 2010, 07:15:43 UTC
Thanks! This is the story I started writing on my sleep-deprived trip home from BP. *g* And then I had to put it on hold for the BB fic.

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lilac_one June 29 2010, 22:56:45 UTC
This is such fun. You've created a very believable world. I absolutely loved your explanation for why no one noticed Vecchio looking different. I third the motion that you write more in this 'verse.

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luzula June 30 2010, 19:32:22 UTC
I'm glad you liked the worldbuilding! I had a lot of fun with that.

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spuffyduds June 29 2010, 23:27:02 UTC
Oh, this is absolutely lovely! I adore how a magical AU makes logical sense of some things that the show itself was--well, magical about. Beautifully written and it feels like there's a whole fascinating world back there.

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luzula June 30 2010, 19:32:40 UTC
Thanks! I'm so glad it feels like there's a background world out there. \o/ Also, letting Dief actually have the same skills as in canon was kind of satisfying. *g*

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andeincascade June 29 2010, 23:39:17 UTC
Luz, I love this like breathing. Really excellent world building; I'm sitting here contemplating what gifts the other members of Major Crimes might have.

I'd love for you to write more in this universe if the spirit moves you.

\Luz/

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luzula June 30 2010, 19:33:07 UTC
Thank you! Worldbuilding is so much fun. And there might very well be more-their therapist (the one that Welsh tells them to call) has appeared in my head and is prodding me to write.

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andeincascade June 30 2010, 19:52:10 UTC
Heh heh heh. You know it does no good to resist the therapist. :D

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hurry_sundown June 29 2010, 23:59:56 UTC
Luz, this is fantabulous! And I want more. *g*

I particularly like the way you handled Vecchio's undercover assignment and Ray's lack of resemblence to him.

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luzula June 30 2010, 19:33:22 UTC
You might very well get more. *g*

And I'm glad the bit with Vecchio makes sense!

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