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Fit to Burst by primrose

Nov 14, 2007 23:02

Title: Fit to Burst
Summary: Post-COTW, established relationship. The way to a man's heart is through nutrition.
Author: primrose
Prompt: 65. First aboriginal food guide balances traditional,practicalPairing: Fraser/Kowalski ( Read more... )

Comments 29

hawkband1 November 15 2007, 05:15:16 UTC

Great snapshot! Both Fraser and Ray are very much themselves. I like it a lot.

primroseburrows November 15 2007, 05:34:02 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. And also really surprised that I got it posted on time. :)

keerawa November 15 2007, 07:10:16 UTC

He was bone-tired, but his fatigue was bathed in a wash of contentment that bordered on joy.
What a gorgeous description! I treasure a memory of that exact feeling.

And then you had Dief sulking because he can't guard the infant, and Fraser with his heart over-flowing because Ray declared himself Northern.

Can I give you a hug? I really want to, right now. I'm getting all teary.

primroseburrows November 15 2007, 16:51:01 UTC

Aww, thanks! *hugs*

grey853 November 15 2007, 10:53:05 UTC

Sweet and really fun to read. I love stories where I can hear the voices and you've hit it.

primroseburrows November 15 2007, 16:55:14 UTC

I love stories where I can hear the voices and you've hit it.

This is a great compliment for me because those kind of stories are my favourites, too. Thank you!

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primroseburrows November 15 2007, 16:42:38 UTC

I figure that at one point Ray is bound to stick Smarties in the bannock. Kind of like chocolate chip scones. :)

luzula November 15 2007, 13:36:09 UTC

The first section is beautiful, and the rest of it is just wonderfully domestic and sweet.

Of course he was. But he had a reason.

Ha, of course you think so, Fraser.

This, right now, standing with Ray in the house they'd built together and hearing him declare himself Northern, this was one of those times.

I love that in all of what Ray says, the Northern part is what Fraser picks up on, and that it means so much to him.

primroseburrows November 15 2007, 16:53:49 UTC

The first section is beautiful, and the rest of it is just wonderfully domestic and sweet.

I wanted to keep the story soft and quiet, but Fraser would have no part of it.

I love that in all of what Ray says, the Northern part is what Fraser picks up on, and that it means so much to him.

Fraser is a sentimentalist, for sure.