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Fic : Spiders From Mars

Jun 30, 2008 19:34

Title: Spiders From Mars
Author: akamine_chan
Fandom: due South
Pairing: Fraser/Ray K
Rating: R
Warnings: angst, humor, romance
Prompt: 21. Scientists to test space suits, rovers on Nunavut's Mars-like crater
Length: 1,978 words
Notes: Many, many thanks to my lovely betas luzula and leafy22 who did a wonderful job wrangling my confusing verb tenses and at times baffling ( Read more... )

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akamine_chan July 14 2008, 02:41:48 UTC

I actually know a lot of guys like this - and yeah, they work for scientists, usually physicists. The physicists around here are very hands-on, but they still need a lot of help with their diesel generators and the like.

And yeah, I'm still kinda disappointed about the geology.

Fraser losing it and throwing the bowl is great, because I think he definitely has that capacity

Oh, I think Fraser's got a temper but he usually holds back...

I'm glad you liked this, SB.

mergatrude July 2 2008, 00:09:55 UTC

*SMISHES THEM*

I adore the whole set up, and I'm very sorry the boys were so resistant to your desire for geological background. Fraser must have been very wound up indeed!

Thank you for playing! \o/

akamine_chan July 14 2008, 02:37:38 UTC

Thanks, mergatrude. I'm glad it turned out okay.

*shakes fist at Fraser and Ray* I had originally picked this prompt because I knew I could work in the geology...

*shrug* Oh, well. Maybe next time.

keerawa July 2 2008, 16:46:49 UTC

Awwwww! I love Ray, Master of Duct Tape. And the silent tension between them, with Fraser finally losing it and throwing the bowl. Excellent!

akamine_chan July 14 2008, 02:35:46 UTC

Thanks, keerawa. I'm glad you liked it. I can totally see Ray as a Master Of Duct Tape.

leafy22 July 2 2008, 19:23:37 UTC

Yay! I love your clever, competent and inventive Ray - mastered the art of duct tape - hee!

I really enjoyed this story, aka - great stuff!

akamine_chan July 14 2008, 02:35:07 UTC

Thanks are due in a large part to you, m'dear. So thank you!

primroseburrows July 3 2008, 22:28:08 UTC

The Madge and Guy story! Oh, RAY. He also probably wonders why a candy bar would be turning over in its grave, or even buried at all.

Great story. Yay for NASA!Ray and Pent-up-angst!Fraser! :D

akamine_chan July 14 2008, 02:34:26 UTC

Yeah, I really have a thing for competent Ray. And I can imagine Fraser as someone who holds everything in until it explodes in a bowl of caribou stew.

Thanks, prim, for reading and commenting. *g*