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Jul 03, 2008 13:23

Title: Ingenuity
Author: primroseburrows
Pairing/characters F/K, OFC
Rating: PG-13 for Fraserish double entendre
Length: 1292 words
Prompt: Inuvik School Works on Revamping Outdated Library
Disclaimers: Not mine, same as always.

[A/N: This is not the story I intended to write. This isn't even remotely LIKE the story I intended to write. It's all nos4a2no9's fault that it ( Read more... )

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akamine_chan July 3 2008, 23:44:06 UTC
Oh, prim, this was sweet and lovely. And surprisingly sexy for something rated PG13...

I loved this:

Ray pushed himself back from the table by sheer force of will. His empty ice cream bowl still sat there like it was double-dog-daring him to load it up again. He'd already had one good-sized helping, and then another after Grace had gone to bed. If he had thirds he'd pay for it, but damn, Fraser made some kickass ice cream.

*snerk*

Thanks for sharing, m'dear!

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primroseburrows July 4 2008, 00:14:51 UTC
You're welcome! Writing this has stirred me to actually work on my bigger fic.

Someday I might even write something higher-rated than PG-13. Maybe.

Thank you for reading it and liking it.

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mergatrude July 4 2008, 01:33:12 UTC
Awww! Yay! This was sweet, and yes, sexy - there, at the end, mmmmmmmmmm kisses tasting of ice cream!

Thank you so much for playing! &hearts

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primroseburrows July 4 2008, 02:51:27 UTC
Thank you for letting me post late!

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fenlings July 4 2008, 03:00:41 UTC
This is adorable! Yay, bowl of mockery!

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primroseburrows July 4 2008, 03:14:07 UTC
Thanks! :D

My problem is that when I reread, I keep thinking "Bowl of Mochrie".

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fenlings July 4 2008, 05:27:15 UTC
Now I'm picturing Colin with a bowl-cut... with a variety of wigs... yes I see how that could be distracting for you.

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peacey July 4 2008, 14:51:32 UTC
I know nothing of this fandom *at all*, but this little slice of life is lovely in its quietness. You get a definite sense of who each of these characters is, as well as what the mechanics of their relationships are. You're good with dialogue; conversations come off naturally, and the characters' voices are distinct. Well done!

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primroseburrows July 4 2008, 15:06:33 UTC
Aww, thanks, dear! :D :D :D

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slidellra July 4 2008, 15:19:50 UTC
This is yay!

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primroseburrows July 5 2008, 12:26:18 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you like it!

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