For Threequarters by Sprat

Dec 20, 2005 21:42

A very grateful THANK YOU to gurrier for splendiforous last-minute beta. Thanks also to china_shop, who didn't beta this story, but who was kind enough to steer me away from the wrong direction, and to aerye, for organizing.

I hope you liked it, threequarters! I'm sorry I didn't manage to work in those gloves!

The Best Parts of Lonely

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pearl_o December 25 2005, 03:39:23 UTC
Oh, man, I liked this a lot.

"Fuuuuck," he told Gomez. "You're killing me, here." But Gomez didn't listen, of course. TV people, they hardly ever did.

Heeeee.

And Fraser has the highest regard for the people of Denmark! Heee.

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sprat December 31 2005, 18:03:15 UTC
YAAAY! Thank you! I'm so glad you liked. :)

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threequarters December 25 2005, 04:24:59 UTC
This is just too great for words, but I'm going to try anyway.

First of all, Ray undercover as homeless is like the best thing on the planet. Ever.

He propped his bare feet on the coffee table and tapped out the bass line for "Too Drunk To Fuck" on his sweatpants-covered thighs.

YES. Because Ray would TOTALLY love that song. And I love that song. And just, YES.

And then Ray would finish the verse (just so Fraser would know he wasn't, like, the man around here)

That's so perfectly Ray, I love it.

The Cubs were even playing, which Ray thought was pretty obliging of them

Ha!

"You know, like some kind of crazed Danish bear-trainer who has a grudge against Mounties is stalking you, and we both got an instinct about it, and now you need back up before she tries to blow you up. Something like that."

There was a pause. "Really, Ray," Fraser said, eventually. "That's just silly."

Ray huffed out a laugh. "Right, because stuff like that never happens in real life.God, yes. Just absolutely perfect ( ... )

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sprat December 31 2005, 18:06:18 UTC
:) :) Yay! I'm so glad you liked this. I really did try to get more homeless, glove-wearing Ray in there for you, but it did not want to happen. Thanks so much for the excellent feedback!

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bluebrocade December 25 2005, 06:49:51 UTC
Lovely!! Sweet and funny and the tension was just crackling. Such a great Ray voice! Loved it!

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sprat December 31 2005, 18:07:13 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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buzzylittleb December 25 2005, 21:59:43 UTC
So he kept his trap shut, so to speak, and he kissed Fraser some more instead.
Oh yeah. This is wonderful, really wonderful.

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sprat December 31 2005, 18:07:49 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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lilac_one December 26 2005, 03:47:40 UTC
I love this!

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sprat December 31 2005, 18:08:11 UTC
:) Yay! Thanks!

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