Coming Unglued, by akamine_chan

Aug 03, 2009 21:38

Title: Coming Unglued
Author: akamine_chan
Challenge: ds_shakespeare
Fandom: Hard Core Logo
Characters: Joe Dick
Rating: R
Prompt:
There's daggers in men's smiles.
MacBeth Act II, Scene III.
Length: 2,141 words
Notes: Thanks to sageness for the initial push in the right direction and to sisterofdream for sounding board duties. verushka70 made me feel better and soothed my nerves and shared some ( Read more... )

author; akamine_chan, r, 2000-5000 words, hard core logo

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et_tu_lj August 4 2009, 04:55:22 UTC
This is great, Aka. I love how everyone sees right through him, even we he denies it to himself.

You never knew when it would come in handy. And this gave me chills.

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akamine_chan August 4 2009, 05:28:47 UTC
Thank you, m'dear.

I love how everyone sees right through him, even we he denies it to himself.

Poor Joe. He's so in denial. *pets him* I'm glad you enjoyed this - it turned out to be a difficult story to get down...

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andeincascade August 4 2009, 05:39:48 UTC
Thank you, Aka, for not burning. I would not have wanted to miss this. Your Joe (calculating but desperate) is perfect and I ache for him.

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verushka70 August 4 2009, 06:39:40 UTC
Yay! You did it! And -- Oh, Joe. His nervousness and desperation are so raw by the end, the angst is palpable.
*hearts*
*in a weird way*

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akite August 4 2009, 15:31:22 UTC
*shakes head* Joe, Joe, Joe, how you love lying to yourself, both about Billy and how this time was going to be different. Marvelous look into his head and how he put together the benefit.

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vsee August 5 2009, 00:51:13 UTC
Ah, gods, that's the stuff, honey. *wallows*

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akamine_chan August 5 2009, 04:02:25 UTC
Thanks, V. I'm glad you liked it.

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