LJ Idol, Topic 26: "Nuclear Intensity" [fiction]

May 07, 2012 07:17

"So.....was it good for you, then?"

"Oh geez. I'd really hoped for better from you, after an experience like that. Men are so insecure. You really couldn't tell ( Read more... )

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notodette May 8 2012, 03:52:25 UTC
lol I always love your entries.

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dslartoo May 8 2012, 12:24:48 UTC
Awesome! It's nice to be loved. "You like me, you REALLY like me!" :)

In all seriousness, thanks for the visit and for the comment love. I do appreciate it.

cheers,
Phil

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dslartoo May 8 2012, 12:26:07 UTC
"Twist" endings are not ordinarily my style but that's just where this little piece took me. I'm glad it didn't seem forced or anything. Thanks for coming by!

cheers,
Phil

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whipchick May 8 2012, 05:32:52 UTC
Great twist! Another chili lover right here :) There's a festival in my hometown where you can pay $10 for the chili-tasting bracelet, and then go from booth to booth having samples of chili from different restaurants and social clubs. My favorite was a Thai curry chili with a chopped mango garnish, though there's definitely a place for traditional and smokin' hot!

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dslartoo May 8 2012, 12:27:39 UTC
I'm pretty sure there's a chili fest or two around here somewhere (this is Texas, after all) but so far I haven't yet found out where it is. I should really get on that -- although I don't actually make chili like the guy in the story, I do love me some tasty chili. Maybe not quite to the extent she does, though. :)

I wonder if you react that way when you eat chili, though. Red hair and all that. :)

Thanks as always for dropping by!

cheers,
Phil

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sarcasmoqueen May 8 2012, 16:05:00 UTC
Ah, you got me!!

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dslartoo May 8 2012, 16:57:32 UTC
Excellent. I don't usually do "twist" endings so I hoped this wasn't obvious from a mile away. Thanks!

cheers,
Phil

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dslartoo May 8 2012, 16:58:11 UTC
I toyed with a couple of different chili names before deciding on that one. Seemed to fit. :)

Glad you enjoyed the piece! And thanks for coming by.

cheers,
Phil

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