LJ Idol, Topic 26: "Nuclear Intensity" [fiction]

[dslartoo]

"So.....was it good for you, then?"

"Oh geez. I'd really hoped for better from you, after an experience like that. Men are so insecure. You really couldn't tell

Comments

[pixiebelle]

Hehe I was waiting to see if this would be something spicy or hot and I was right! Very funny entry, it worked perfectly :)

[dslartoo]

Ahhh, I figured somebody would have figured it out before the ending; I just hoped it wasn't TOO obvious. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it even if you did see it (ahem) coming. :)

Thanks for coming by!

cheers,
Phil

[jacq22]

I was totally dragged in and did not see it coming! ooops no pun intended.

Clever stuff, chill and all! A funny piece.

[dslartoo]

Hee. My hope was that people might have *some* idea what was going on wasn't quite what it appeared, but not to guess the real reason behind the flailing until the end. I seem to have mostly succeeded with that, which pleases me.

Thanks for coming by! I appreciate the comments, as always.

cheers,
Phil

[copyright1983]

That woman sure is desperate for chili. :) Well played!

[dslartoo]

Well, you know how it is when you get really really hungry. :)

Thanks for dropping by!

cheers,
Phil

[lawchicky]

Lol- this made me chuckle. Great twist!