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[dsrmousey]

Through cracked eyelid I watched my sister Eisha, pad across the room in her small clothes. She grabbed her woolen stockings, long sleeved heavy cotton shift and indigo blue pinafore from her chair and quickly headed to the fire, poking at the embers until they gave in to her ministrations and the small pieces of kindling stared to burn. I snuggled

Comments

[engarian]

I love stories with happy endings and you could have brought this one either direction. I'm glad you chose the happy direction instead of the tear-filled one.

- Erulisse (one L)

[dsrmousey]

I seem not to not want unhappy endings these.days. The times seem to be filled with enough tragedy! Peace~~~ D

[dadi]

I hope you and your family are over the worst by now!

And I am so happy the story developed in a happy way. We need happiness these times!

[dsrmousey]

We seem to be. My hubs who has Multiple Sclerosis, and my 20mos. Grandbaby are still fighting congestion but are slowly recovering. I take care of my grandson during the day while his dad works (don't get me started on his mama. And my 66yr. Old baby too so this has been a rough week .

And boy do we need happy endings. Peace~~~D

[d0gs]

I'm so glad the story ended how it did!

I loved the voice in this too :D

[dsrmousey]

Thank you. I've been working on first person! I'm glad you enjoyed! Peace~~~

[roina_arwen]

I adore period pieces! Very well written.

[dsrmousey]

Thanks L! Am not sure I answered but I like them too! Peace~~~D

[swirlsofblue]

I really loved the descriptions here, it's very evocative, and I loved the way it grows the sense of foreboding with the about turn at the wink