Empire of Ashes (2c/?)

[dubu_dubu]

Comments

[mara_ciro]

What a nice surprise before I started studying for my finals. ...

OH NOOOO! Hyegyo and Jinyoung. My heart... *sobs* This chapter is too depressing for my heart. I now worry what happens to poor Hyegyo and Jinyoung after this. Although I want to feel for the Summer Sun and her pent up anger, I can't bring myself to do it.

I KNEW Minwoo and Minho were the same. Although I still don't get why Minho introduced himself as Minwoo. I guess I should just wait for the next chapter.

PS: If you want a beta-reader, I'll be available after October 18th.

[dubu_dubu]

Yes, you'll learn more about Minho's situation in the next chapter.

I will keep you in mind as a potential beta! To be honest, I'm planning on finishing the entire thing first, then going back and editing one final time. The reason why is sometimes life happens and there is always a potential that I will have to drop a story. I would hate to keep a beta hanging.

[dbsk_love]

omg, stupid summer sun did this???? i hope those poor girls recover soon.
on a happier note, taetae met minho!!!! woot woot!
update soon!

[dubu_dubu]

Thanks for the comment!

[orangeideas]

Oh my god more!!!! I need more.......I nearly criedfr hyegyo and jinyoung..... Thank god taeyeon went put..... Jinyoung, I hope you're safe.........this update really thrilled me..... Oh my god please update soon... Me and my friends constantly look up for your updates

[dubu_dubu]

Wow, you and your friend read fic together? Great friends :) And I'm honored to be one of those fics on your reading list.

Thanks for reading again!

[yesalmen]

this chapter was perfect ,the way you explained the scenes and the feeling ohhhhhh
really so great work it was like reading a thriller hohohoh^^' so exciting.

But it was really sad what THE SUMMER SUN did TT poor girls. And yes Taeyeon, you could be the one who suffered that TT

oohhh Minho, if it wasn't for the girls tragedy I would enjoy more 2min encounter^^'

thanks for the update, can't wait the next.

[dubu_dubu]

Yes, my primary goal is to make my readers have all the feelings, so I'm glad it's working out for you.

Thanks for the great comment! There will be a lot more 2min in the future. I promise you that ^_^

[dubu_dubu]

Haha, no need to thank me. I enjoy writing this story though occasionally it does feel like pulling teeth.

I'm glad to hear you enjoy the characterizations. Writing an AU AND a genderswap story makes one worry about character a lot.

Thanks for your comment!