poetry on poetry

[duckie1027]

I WANT TO know why people dont like me

I WANT TO SEE into their heads and know why they are so mean

I WANT TO YELL AT the top of my lungs

TOMORROW, I'LL START trying to fix my imperfections

THEN I'LL FIND OUT if i succeeded in doing this

I WANT TO WATCH my self from another's perspective

AND I WANT TO KEEP notes so i know what to change

I WANT TO

Comments

[xsolitaryxsoulx]

we both used "i want to yell at the top of my lungs"! *awesomeness*
and that was very well written my dear *hug*

[duckie1027]

thanks babe... u really think it was good???

that wasnt the one i wrote in class i wrote that one rite before i posted it...