Comments | duckspeakeasy: [LJ Idol] Liar's Smile

duckspeakeasy

[LJ Idol] Liar's Smile

Mar 05, 2012 20:53

( It had been created to be perfect, static, and somewhere along the line it had become immortal. )

nerd sniping, it's a thriller, lj idol, fiction

Comments 26

alien_infinity March 7 2012, 17:57:46 UTC

This was very well-done. I got drawn into the world you created. :)

duckspeakeasy March 8 2012, 03:20:03 UTC

Thank you very much for your lovely comment! I'm very glad that it drew you in, for the longer stories sometimes I worry that people won't make it through the entire thing. Thank you again, I really appreciate it!

lawchicky March 7 2012, 20:10:04 UTC

Really well done :(

duckspeakeasy March 8 2012, 03:30:27 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm kind of a wimp so stories with a lot of violence or horror are a lot trickier for me to get right xD Thanks again for commenting, it means a lot. :)

medleymisty March 8 2012, 00:06:04 UTC

I love this story. I'm saving it to my favorites, so I can read it again.

Wonderfully well written and thoughtful, with excellent descriptions.

duckspeakeasy March 8 2012, 03:48:32 UTC

Wow, I feel so honored/flattered that you liked it so much! (Seriously, I have like the hugest grin on my face right now :DDD) Thank you very much! You're awesome! :D

notodette March 8 2012, 16:29:48 UTC

What a great and compelling story.

duckspeakeasy March 9 2012, 00:15:31 UTC

Why thank you! :) (Also, your userpic is kind of awesome :DD)

whipchick March 8 2012, 17:00:05 UTC

Wow, what a neat take-off from both the prompt and the gun-kata concept!

duckspeakeasy March 9 2012, 00:20:36 UTC

Thanks!! I was watching a police show on tv where that episode's bad guy fought with a sword, and I wasn't paying attention to it at all until I realized, yes, he totally just brought a knife to a gun fight :DDD Thanks for always reading and reviewing! You're awesome!