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athena2 June 14 2005, 03:23:13 UTC
This is my favourite piece I have read of yours.

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thedissident June 14 2005, 06:08:59 UTC
Thanks ^_^
I was trying to do something about mortality, but I was trying really hard to produce something that didn't sound like goth poetry. The hardest part of this was writing it in a manner that justified poetry instead of narrative form. I'm still not sure if perhaps narrative would have been more appropriate.

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athena2 June 14 2005, 06:28:25 UTC
I think it worked well as a poem.

I often have that problem with something I want to write about where I'm stuck between poem and short story. And it usually comes out as some strange too short of a story that isn't really a story at all. (Vide: The entry right above this one)

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