It's clockwork. And a day late.

[athena2]

I'm not going to beat up myself over not having this story finished. So I'm going to post the 1500 some words i have written of the first part, I have another 1000 that are there, but its broken fragments of the end of the story. I'm having more trouble than I originally thought getting this piece out. This is what i have now

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[stephywang]

This reminds me of conversations we have had and that you may have had with David and also experiences with friends you have talked about in the past. An allegory of this community, perhaps a little? I'm not very good at critiquing... I like the familiarity of it. The Catholic piece was a little alien to me because I haven't really had much experience with that world. Keep up the work, I can't wait to read more.