Comments | duelpersonality: Blades of Glory short

duelpersonality

Blades of Glory short

Feb 09, 2008 19:50

I know what he's doing in there. It's hard to miss, really, knowing who he is, what he is. I hear those sounds every day, and more than once a day, at that. I should be against the law; making those sounds, doing what he's doing, all when he knows I'm in the next room, when he knows I can hear every heavy breath, every strangled moan, every small ( Read more... )

blades of glory, jimmy, chazz

Comments 14

tripperfunster February 10 2008, 01:59:24 UTC

Ha! Loved it! I like to think of myself as a smart woman, but you sucked me in and tricked me anyway! (maybe because I'd love to read a Chazz/wank story.)

Welcome to livejournal and the Blades sites! <3

I feel so loved duelpersonality February 10 2008, 03:27:21 UTC

Thank you so much for reading it (I realize it didn't take long)!
I'm really glad that it was a convincing turnaround, and I wish I could say it's because it's so well-written (I wish), but really, the fic tricked me, too. I started out writing a "Chazz/wank story," then the idea struck me that I'd much rather it be Chazz who's getting the ear-porn (maybe I can try again at doing a Chazz self-love fic).

Re: I feel so loved tripperfunster February 10 2008, 06:15:37 UTC

Have you written anything else? I'd love to read it! *begs for Chazz/wank*

Re: I feel so loved duelpersonality February 10 2008, 06:20:23 UTC

Well, I have and I haven't. It's in progress, and I'm not sure where it's going right now. No, that's wrong. I'm sure where it ends up, but not how it gets there. And I have several ideas for fics that I haven't even begun to work out. And now I need to write a Chazz/self fic, as well. It would be a lot to do if it weren't so enjoyable

xenafox February 10 2008, 05:58:17 UTC

THAT. Was brilliant. I expected it to be Chazz as well. It is a pity he locks that door.

Awsome job in such a small amount of words O_O

duelpersonality February 10 2008, 06:24:05 UTC

Thanks very much *I'm blushing, look* I liked my original idea so much, but then this came along, and I knew it was much better. I couldn't resist that last bit, especially knowing how repressed Jimmy is. I wanted to try to work this into a longer fullslash fic, but I think it's good right here (at least for now)

xenafox February 10 2008, 06:29:58 UTC

^_^

Lol I both love and hate that, when I'm working with one idea and one that seems better is just like *INVADE*. That last bit is just too awesome.

Yea, it's great right there. But I support a full slashfic ;D

duelpersonality February 11 2008, 04:14:55 UTC

I wanted to make this a fullslash fic, and I probably will in a sequel or something, but I couldn't bear to add to the end of this bit. I'm already in the process of making an unrelated fullslash fic now

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duelpersonality February 11 2008, 04:16:20 UTC

Thanks^^

todead2cry February 11 2008, 03:03:10 UTC

haha- loved it. I can see Jimmy in one of the old Herbal Essences commercials!

duelpersonality February 11 2008, 04:17:43 UTC

Thank you. I got that same image in my head while I was writing the last lines^^

lady_mouse04 February 11 2008, 20:58:16 UTC

That's better than what MY posts are like.............

duelpersonality February 13 2008, 02:09:07 UTC

Sweetheart, your fics aren't bad, they're just a bit unpolished. I'm sure that with time and practice you'll improve