comment fic meme!

Aug 06, 2012 08:42

I have decided to ignore all responsibility today ;-)

Comment with an existing verse from my master list and a brief prompt

YAY! Random writing when I should be doing other things :D

FILLED PROMPTS

Trainfic
The AC is out and Jared is grumpier than Jensen
Jared reading off someone's iPad on the train
Dealing with children on the trainLove is a ( Read more... )

broken bone, comment!fic, cops and robbers, big bang 2012, best laid plans, girl!jensen, gooooooooooooooooal!, player number 2, copfic, the way to really fly, this long silence, 100 days and messes, softball is not for the delicate

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violateraindrop August 6 2012, 15:29:31 UTC
Just like me. I watched American Psycho today instead of working on my BA thesis, okay I did work on it, but that was mainly copy+paste from one of my previous papers (which I am allowed to do!).

Train!fic...someone else is using an e-reader which is soooo not romantic.

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 16:19:55 UTC
I'm sorry, but can you clarify your prompt? I'm having a hard time understanding if 'someone' means Jared or Jensen, or someone complete different on the train, and the connection with romance? My brain might be fried from the weekend!

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violateraindrop August 6 2012, 17:04:18 UTC
I just translated something from German which you probably can't use in English. Romantic more in the sense of old-fashioned or nostalgic like Jack Sparrow is totally different from the pirates nowadays. Reading a book on an e-reader when you could have a worn paperback which has a bigger emotional value or something like that.

Someone else is using one where Jared and Jensen can see and maybe they discuss what the person reads (*coughs*porn*coughs*).

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 18:47:35 UTC
"Oh my God," Jared whispers excitedly. "You're never gonna belie-"

"No," Jensen says quickly, not daring to look up from his iPhone.

"But he-"

"I don't care."

"-Almost got himself killed."

Jensen knows he shouldn't, but he sighs and asks anyway. "Who?"

"Rodrigo!"

Jensen clears his throat and gives Jared a stern look. "We are on a quiet car," he whispers as softly as he can. It's possible that he's not even speaking and is just mouthing the words for how quiet he's trying to be.

It doesn't matter. Jared leans closer and goes on to explain, "He just dove into the water to save Eleanor's necklace. The one with the locket her father gave her with the picture of her mother before she died. But the undertow dragged him under and then there were sharks in the area and the other ship came back to attack."

"Of course it did," Jensen replies without emotion in his voice or on his face. He goes back to his New York Times app as Jared leans forward in the seat to look at the one in front of them. Jensen mumbles, "Stop reading over her ( ... )

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riyku August 6 2012, 15:38:16 UTC
YAY!

How about This Long Silence? The boys make it to the pacific.

Or, for something more light hearted, farm boys! Anything at all, but I'd really like to see how they got to where they are now.

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 17:08:54 UTC
The edge of the rock is dusty, little pebbles crumbling over the edge. Still, here they stand, atop a viewing point on the walking trail up this pocket of mountains in northern Washington. The air feels a bit thin but crisp with saltwater and a slight chill ( ... )

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riyku August 6 2012, 19:22:02 UTC
eeeek! I love the world you created with this story. There's a quietness to them that I'm so very fond of. Thanks so much for revisiting these guys again. You're the best, kiddo!

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 20:29:26 UTC
Thank you bb! I've thought a lot about what they would get up to once they have to settle down. Now I think they'd likely do it here with Jared's family, because Jensen can't stand to take that fond smile off his face.

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mdlaw August 6 2012, 16:50:37 UTC
There are so much fun. Keep writing! m :)

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 17:31:38 UTC
Thanks! :)

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big_heart_june August 6 2012, 18:52:18 UTC
You're THE BEST, BB! I adore every single gorgeous fill ♥ if you're still writing I'd love more of Daddy!Jensen/Uncle!Jared and the twins! just a sweeeeet schmoopy something..:D

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 19:18:26 UTC
I'M NOT GONNA LIE. THAT YOU PROMPTED THIS IS MAKING MY HEART ALL WARM.

I will write, soon, I promise! I just have something to take care of for a bit first (stupid work).

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big_heart_june August 6 2012, 19:29:55 UTC
EEEE! ♥♥♥ I LOVE THEM AND THEIR STORY SFM.

No hurry, bb, I'm just relieved you're still writing and inspired!

Also! every single time I see this Dean icon I just want to lick him...:P

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dugindeep August 6 2012, 20:07:16 UTC
Jensen beats Danneel home, and is oddly thankful for that because the scene comes home to is a sight to behold.

He’d worried about leaving Jared alone with the twins for too long, especially as it was Jared’s first time watching them alone. And right now, he can’t believe how his heart suddenly speeds up and his hands become clammy, making him wipe them off on his dress pants as he comes through the door.

"Hey," he whispers then smiles warmly when Jared glances up him.

Jared is spread out on the couch with Julia carefully resting between his legs, which are bent inward as if creating a warm shield around her. Jack is belly down to Jared's shirt, tiny baby fingers curled into the cotton, face pillowed on Jared's chest.

Dear Lord, Jensen's heart aches with the image. Instead of coming in to relieve Jared of the mess around him or both babies keeping him from leaving the couch, Jensen pulls out his phone and snaps a handful of quick pictures ( ... )

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wendy August 6 2012, 19:53:14 UTC
SOCCER! Uhm, road trip.

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dugindeep August 7 2012, 00:27:21 UTC
"Chee-tohs!" Jensen shouts happily as he tosses the fun size bag in the open window of the back seat ( ... )

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tebtosca August 7 2012, 00:39:58 UTC
Jensen slaps Jared's shoulder. "Pick on someone your own size."

"Yeah," Nathan says. "Go pick on Big Foot!"

bwhahaha, ILU

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dugindeep August 7 2012, 00:42:04 UTC
:DDDDDDDD

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