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tebtosca November 19 2013, 23:22:06 UTC
I WANT TO LEAVE A COMMENT HERE TOO.

I already told you this, but I love this SO much. I don't think I've ever seen teen Danneel POV in a fic, and you write her better than anyone I know (besides me *cough*) so it makes it even better. She was so prickly and snarky and real and I could totally relate to her. Besides the whole "gets to have threesome with J2" thing because, hello, so not my high school experience haha.

Love it to bits <33333333

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dugindeep November 20 2013, 14:37:57 UTC
YOU ARE ALLOWED.

Ahhhhh I'm so happy you adore this so much! :D Especially the Danneel POV. After a while, I kept thinking, this isn't going to work, no one will read/like her POV. SO HAPPY IT WORKED.

<33333333333333

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deanshot November 20 2013, 00:28:15 UTC
Superb story sweetie.
I enjoyed it from the very first line onwards.
It showed us how awkward it can be to be a teenager while learning how to grow up and fall in love and how much hormones can take over ones person.
I loved all three of the main characters, each one of them were written excellently.
I really liked how close they became as friends before anything had started but how stronger their friendship remained after they all fell for each other.
Thanks for sharing, it helped cheer me up and made me smile at certain parts.
*Hugs*

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dugindeep November 20 2013, 14:42:53 UTC
Oh thank you darling! So happy to hear the awkward teenage years came through well even while telling a different kind of HS story. Also am glad you enjoyed the characters and how they came together.

Thank you so much!

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ephemerall November 24 2013, 03:43:14 UTC
This is perfection.

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walkoutasone November 25 2013, 20:25:19 UTC
I'm back!
It was a wonderful read. I enjoyed the awkwardness but also the moment when the tension was finally relieved and the three of them could be happy together.
I'd love to read more about them, maybe they could go to college together or stay together in their adult lives or ... :D It's just that all three were... excellently written, you know, I could imagine them being persons in real life. Danneel's background story was believable and also sad, so it was nice to see the boys making her happy again. I just want to learn more about them :)
(And maybe I should get a Danneel icon as well... )

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fiercelynormal November 28 2013, 01:26:37 UTC
I can't begin to tell you how much I loved this. The scene with Danneel and her Dad made me cry, and the shy, awkward romance between Danneel and the boys was so much fun to watch developing. You are AMAZING! <33

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