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alasse November 9 2009, 04:20:29 UTC
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. This was so, so, soooooooo cute. Seeing Jensen and Jared be awkward and into each other ROCKED, and, god, Nathan was the best. LOVED THIS, hon, sooo much ♥

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dugindeep November 9 2009, 04:35:14 UTC
THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! I have been dying to write this for a like a month, you have no idea, so I'm glad it turned out so well.

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13chapters November 9 2009, 04:32:58 UTC
DED OF SCHMOO.

[briefly revives]I love how you write children. It's so dead-on, it's obvious you've spent a lot of time around kids. They aren't overly precocious or annoyingly cute here, they're just kids.[/back to DED OF SCHMOO]

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dugindeep November 9 2009, 04:36:25 UTC
Hahaha, yes. I swear to you, the whole 'it was 7-2. we were the 7 and they were 2' actually happened at one of their games. My sis-in-law and I cracked up SO HARD. And they're always, always falling all over each other and no one knows how to pass the ball. Hahah. Also, my niece is so dead on with flat humor and we are always bantering with her, it's awesome. So yeah, I love kids like that.

Thank you for reading bb &hearts

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loveisimmortal November 9 2009, 04:49:45 UTC
\o/

I LOVE THIS!!

Nathan is so my younger brother, bless his heart.

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dugindeep November 9 2009, 05:46:23 UTC
HEEE! Thank you! I'm glad you liked Nathan :-D

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earthquakedream November 9 2009, 04:51:48 UTC
UGH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. It physically pained me to just minimize this while I finished up my writing for the day but SO WORTH THE WAIT HOMG. Cute kids and Jared and Jensen flirting and Jared's big smiles and awesome dadness and AMAZING I LOVE IT.

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dugindeep November 9 2009, 05:46:41 UTC
Aww thank you bb! I'm glad you liked it!

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grace_fully November 9 2009, 05:14:55 UTC
omfg ATHLETIC CHILDREN AHHHHH, pg kink. is that a real thing? i feel gross now.

demetri martin reference: ok to say, in general, "i love kids." not ok to get specific: "i love twelve year olds."

I DON'T LOVE EIGHT YEAR OLDS. I LOVE PEE WEE SOCCER. and dads who are wicked passionate about their kids! omg best environment for jared's positivity EVER, i wanted to eat him, with the being encouraging and swinging his kid around and making jensen fall in love with him omgggg

sorry i am like really sick right now? and therefore a crazy person

but jensen's restraint through this whole thing had me SO TENSE AUGH, and trying to figure out the family situation, and finally allowing jared to OMG POUNCE ON HIM!!

dude, love. so hard.

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dugindeep November 9 2009, 05:48:52 UTC
HEE. You are so, so awesome for the ego.

I used to be like 'eh' about kids (aside from my niece and nephew because they're AWESOME ALRIGHT?). But then watching these kids play soccer I was like OMG WEE KIDS! It was fucking adorable, you have no idea.

Thank you thank you thank you for all the awesome feedback, especially Jared's fathering and Jensen's restraint. Those were like the two most important things to me. :-D

ILU BB &hearts

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