Lie Like You Mean It Chapter 15 part 2

Mar 19, 2009 20:38

Title: Lie like you mean it.
Rating: PG-13 for language
Pairings: AkuRoku (main), Zemyx, Marluxia/Larxene, Sephiroth/Cloud
Word Count: About 12,000 this chapter, over 115,000 total so far.
Summary: AU. Axel is an assassin in Chicago of 1914, with no morals to speak of and an aversion to truth in all its many forms. When fate puts him in Roxas's ( Read more... )

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kiaarra March 20 2009, 15:51:57 UTC
Hate you? How could I possibly hate you, you are awesome! No one of concequence even died in this chapter XD A cliff hanger, yes, but a good cliff hanger, in that I *almost* don't want to read the next part...

Also, the lateness = good for me! I just ended the week of death in which there were 3 midterms, 1 project and a lab due.

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dumbtastic_duo March 20 2009, 16:10:22 UTC
Ahaha, well, I endeavor never to write cliffhangers where you know wnat's going to happen next - I see that so much in books and things. You know the hero's going to live and get the heroine and so on. I think that tension only really works if you honestly think it could go either way.

Thanks for commenting! And yeah, midterms were the reason for my late update too, haha. Now that's over with! *breathes a sigh of relief*

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kiaarra March 21 2009, 03:29:37 UTC
. . . a la JK Rowling X_X :P but this tension is epic!

Wow, You wrote all that during midterms? I become completely non-functional during midterms.

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dumbtastic_duo March 21 2009, 08:17:37 UTC
Haha, I'm glad you think so ^_^

...I'm not very functional during midterms either. This is a very productive nonfunctional. I was eating and breathing study and this fic. It basically hasn't left my mind in eight months, and now I'm really getting to the meat of it! I get up at six when my first class is at nine or ten and I write - then I study for the rest of the day. It doesn't result in a lot of sleep - but writing destresses me beautifully, so it's not really a problem!

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Re: <3 dumbtastic_duo March 21 2009, 08:24:36 UTC
Hehe, we will see, won't we? ^_____^ Thanks again for reading!

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fuebiinnuendo March 21 2009, 11:25:21 UTC
You and me should get married, because I LOVE YOUXINFINITY!

Wow...just...wow. My anger for Axel has now transferred to Rufus, though I didn't really like him in the first place.

LALALALA I'M NOT LISTENING! LALALALA! So, out of all the awesome characters, which ones will die *making mental counter in head*

So far, three. Larxy, Marly, and Zexy. Oh those poor things. XD

Can't wait for the next update *gives you AkuRoku diamond ring* :'D

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dumbtastic_duo March 21 2009, 19:53:49 UTC
Haha, that amuses me because I also like Rufus. He's cold, he's calculating, he's ambitious and - wait, those are probably considered bad things to most people, aren't they? I think I just have a thing for baddies XD I should just accept it now, haha.

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fuebiinnuendo March 23 2009, 20:20:12 UTC
well, I think we ALL have a thing for baddies in the end, amiright? XD

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dumbtastic_duo March 23 2009, 21:40:51 UTC
Oh, of course. If I didn't love baddies I wouldn't be writing this XD

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mdsymphonie April 6 2009, 10:45:39 UTC
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE THIS ON SUCH A DREADFUL CLIFFIE!

*dies inside*

I wanna knowwwwww.......*flails*

*curls in corner*

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