Lie Like You Mean It Chapter 16 part 2

[dumbtastic_duo]

Title: Lie like you mean it.
Rating: PG-13 for language
Pairings: AkuRoku (main), Zemyx, Marluxia/Larxene, Sephiroth/Cloud
Word Count: About 16,000 this chapter, over 130,000 total.
Summary: AU. Axel is an assassin in Chicago of 1914, with no morals to speak of and an aversion to truth in all its many forms. When fate puts him in Roxas's way, he

Comments

[kiaarra]

Nooooo you weren't supposed to write the end before I even started exams!!! (my own fault for not having the will power to wait to read it until exams start to really stress me out, what can I say, I just like being one of the first people to comment) Not that I'm complaining, I probably would have read it right away even if it meant skipping an exam. (ok, maybe not, but it totally would have been worth it)

Beautiful ending. I'm very glad you didn't just end it after the epic battle. Everything was resolved, and in such a unique way, as always. I love that you brought Riku in at the end (and the way you wrote him, just brilliant). I'm glad you finally made it thogugh! It was well worth it. At the same time it's sad that it's over. Definitely one of my favorite fanfics to date!

[dumbtastic_duo]

Thanks very much!

I'm glad you liked all the resolution - I was afraid it might be too much. But, at the same time, I'd been waiting to write some of this stuff for forever!

And I'm a little bit sad that it's over too - but this isn't going to be my last KH fic either! A short break to write some original fiction, and then I should be back full force.

Thanks again for reading! Your support means a ton.

[kiaarra]

Not too much. Maybe could have been put in a separate chapter, or in an epiolgue, but definitely not too much. (Also love the lack of mention of WWI, let's not spoil their "happy" ending now).

Ooo originaly fiction, haven't read much of that recently, I may ahve to look into this. I'll definitely be waiting for more KH fic in any case!

Thank you for writing! Where would i be without fanfic? (studying that's where I'd be. . . and we all know how much fun studying is)

[dumbtastic_duo]

*laughs* Could have been, yes. In fact the only reason it wasn't was because, well, by the time I realized it was going to need one I was almost done, and I'm just like - screw it. They get it all at once, heh.

And yeah... studying... Unfortunately necessary. Much luck to you with that!

[fuebiinnuendo]

This is all kinds of awesome. Also, I would like to say that I love you, in all kinds of ways. The part with Axel and Roxas made me get up, run around, squeal, and then sit back down again while I bit my lip in anticipation.

Oh yes, because you do this to me. And again, I congratulate you, finishing a multi-chapter fanfiction is so fucking satisfying! Though I haven't really had the pleasure...lol.

So thank you, thank you so much for writing this, it was a real pleasure to read, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

[dumbtastic_duo]

Haha, you squealed, like out loud? That makes me happy inside.

And yeah, finishing one of these things feels so good, you wouldn't believe! There should be new stuff up in the near future.

Thanks for following thus far!

[dumbtastic_duo]

...This chapter took two hours to read? I had no idea! I'm really glad you enjoyed though, even if your finals may suffer a little ;) (My midterms certianly suffered while I was writing this!)

Thanks for commenting!

[sakuraketsueki]

Hah... Oh wow. Amazing. This entire story was just so utterly amazing... And I love the ending! LOVE IT

[dumbtastic_duo]

Wow, you managed to flatter not one but two of my fics in one single comment! I'm grinning like an idiot right now. Thanks for making my day!

[nierx]

I love the whole happy ending. And how the lemons were implied because some people put in lemons right in the ending and it gets to be a whole lemon-fest. Adding a SoRiku moment was just perfect. This is going into memories!

[dumbtastic_duo]

Hehe, you just made me happy. Thanks so much, I'm flattered!