Waltz of the Damned

Jun 14, 2009 17:56

Title: Waltz of the Damned
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: MarluxiaNaminé
Word Count: About 1,800.
Warnings: Disturbing themes, implied sexual situations, highly experimental prose.
Summary: A tainted lust, white on black, a neverending masquerade, a spiral staircase, and a girl trapped by her desire for all she can never have.
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angel_of_doctor June 15 2009, 03:55:28 UTC
Poor Namine. Great job! :3

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shoshele04 June 15 2009, 04:15:54 UTC
Wow. You just captured all the sick, twisted reasons I secretly love this pairing and brought them to light in the coolest writing style ever. Seriously, this was awesome.

And I really like this line for some reason: Sora flies, streaming, rushing up the spiral tower, shards of him falling away to the bottom and he doesn’t even know. Just...the imagery. So cool.

Great job!

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dumbtastic_duo June 15 2009, 13:13:16 UTC
Thanks so much! I think that many people have a secret love for this pairing, it's just disturbing enough that not a ton write fic for it!

Thanks again for reading! You make me happy :D

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