The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story, Chapter 2

[dumbtastic_duo]

Title: The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story
Chapter: Chapter 2
Series: 2003 anime... sort of. Assuming a slightly alternate ending.
Characters: Roy Mustang, Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric
Rating: M. Mature. Explicit. NC-17. Porn.
Warnings: Serious kinkiness. Pain play, whipping, dominance/submission, bondage.
Summary: Just because you want

Comments

[sonjajade]

MORE PLEASE!!!

*fans self, changes panties*

[dumbtastic_duo]

Ah, if I had a dime for every time a girl said that to me...

Seriously though, I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for letting me know! More is coming very soon.

[pandoraculpa]

If by 'commenting' you mean 'frenzied gibbering', then I'm all over it. aslkjsadlkjasdjhomgMOAR!!!!!

(please?)

[dumbtastic_duo]

Ooh, a frenzied gibber! I've never gotten one of those before! My commenters are being immensely encouraging :) I'm glad you liked, and more is coming soon.

[dragonimp]

I like where this is going! Poor Ed is so needy and confused, he could never just make something simple.

[dumbtastic_duo]

True facts! I'm glad you're enjoying!

[amethyst_koneko]

"And if I wanted to fuck you?" "In that case, I'm sure something could be arranged."

O_O! Holy Bejesus! seme!Ed! You just found my sekrit kink - EdRoy! :) Even tho I damn near passed out at seeing my kink here in black and white, I was a bit surprised to see Ed say it. For someone who gets off on being made helpless, you have to wonder where that sudden dominate demand came from. :) Judging from Roy's actions here, I don't think he's in control as much as he thinks he is and he kinda likes it. ^_^ More fic soon please! :D

[dumbtastic_duo]

Haha, I'm glad I found your secret kink, but unfortunately... You may not be getting a lot more of it XD It was less a sudden urge to dominate than a sudden urge to level the playing field, which will be something of a recurring theme for Ed. Whatever the reason, I'm glad you enjoyed!

But yes, the only place Roy's /really/ in control is in the bedroom! Anywhere else? Not so much!

[amethyst_koneko]

You may not be getting a lot more of it

^_^ That's OK. Just the tease of it added a little bit of extra spice to the fic and that's always a good thing. I kinda had a feeling that Ed just did it to see how far he could push Roy anyway. :)

[dumbtastic_duo]

Yay spice! :) And yeah, pretty much!

[straightcogar]

Oh Edward, you are so wonderfully fucked up. Loving this!

[dumbtastic_duo]

:D thanks! I'm glad you like!