The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story, Chapter 5

[dumbtastic_duo]

Title: The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story
Chapter: Chapter 5/9?
Word count: About... 35,000 so far?
Series: 2003 anime... sort of. Assuming a slightly alternate ending.
Characters: Roy Mustang, Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric
Rating: M. Mature. Explicit. NC-17. Porn.
Warnings: Serious kinkiness. Pain play, whipping, dominance/submission, bondage

Comments

[dragonimp]

it took Roy far longer than it strictly should have to realize that Edward's pants had walked in to have a conversation, not just to be stared at

Ha! XD Ed's still being a devious little bastard. Not that he doesn't enjoy every minute of his "punishment".

[dumbtastic_duo]

:D Yes he does. Yes he does. Glad you're still enjoying!

[pandoraculpa]

Yikes, I'm falling behind! Sorry! Anyway, this was a fun chapter; Roy gets back a little of his own, and Ed totally gets off. I'm really liking the dynamic between the two of them that you're describing. And it goes without saying that I can't wait to see more. :)

[dumbtastic_duo]

Thank you! Yeah, their dynamic is super fun to write. Next chapter soon!

[amethyst_koneko]

I believe I said in my last comment that Ed's punishment wouldn't or might not be something he'd like. I think I've been proven wrong! :D

Ed's cock was still flushed and hard, or else had gotten that way again very quickly once Roy had entered the room. ^_^ I believe Ed stayed that way the whole time! I'm surprised Ed didn't come the minute Roy touched him. :)

it took Roy far longer than it strictly should have to realize that Edward's pants had walked in to have a conversation, not just to be stared at. XD Ed's pants are pure sin aren't they! That ass in those pants could distract a saint! XDDDD

[dumbtastic_duo]

That ass in those pants distracts me in the most /inappropriate/ scenes in the anime. I just stare!