The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story, Chapter 8

[dumbtastic_duo]

Title: The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story
Chapter: Chapter 8/10?
Word count: About 58,000 so far?
Series: 2003 anime... sort of. Assuming a slightly alternate ending.
Characters: Roy Mustang, Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric
Rating: M. Mature. Explicit. NC-17. Porn.
Warnings: Serious kinkiness. Pain play, whipping, dominance/submission, bondage

Comments

[dragonimp]

Wagh, Ed! Stop being an idiot! Roy, go after him! Just when he was starting to accept that he's not fucked up. (Of course, how do you explain that kind of thing...)

[dumbtastic_duo]

Exactly XD How /do/ you explain that kind of thing? I love that in this particular situation, Ed can be reacting completely reasonably and completely stupidly at the same time! Thanks for reading!

[straightcogar]

The angst! Ahhhhh the angst! I both love and hate it.

[dumbtastic_duo]

Haha, I hope I didn't overdo it! I do love a bit of good angst, though. Thanks so much for reading!

[amethyst_koneko]

GAH! THE ANGST! IT KILLS! :(

I keep hoping that there will come a day when Ed will stop running away from his problems but he never does. When is he ever going to learn that this bad habit of his only causes more of the pain he's trying to avoid? :(

[dumbtastic_duo]

Oh no, don't let the angst kill you!

Most of Ed's problems, he punches. He can't punch this problem, though! What does he do when he can't punch his problems? Run away, apparently, the lovable idiot <3

Thanks for reading, and for not actually dying of angst!