The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story, Chapter 9

[dumbtastic_duo]

Title: The Limits of Control: A BDSM love story
Chapter: 9/10?
Word Count: About 68,000
Characters: Roy Mustang, Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric, Winry Rockbell
Rating: M. Mature. Explicit. NC-17. Porn.
Warnings: Serious kinkiness. Pain play, whipping, dominance/submission, bondage. Oh, and a profusion of cursing, though that's going to be the least

Comments

[amethyst_koneko]

Whew indeed! Three very awkward trying conversations in one chapter. That's got to be some kind of record! :) Emotionally draining to say the least. I wasn't sure until the very end which way Winry was going to go. Oh yeah, Ed has yet to have his very awkward trying conversation with Roy! That makes FOUR brain crushing moments! I think you're tying to kill me here! ^_^ I believe I've more than earned that "seriously porny epilogue type thing"! :D

[dumbtastic_duo]

Haha :) Emotionally draining to write, too. And I'm doing my best to write that porny epilogue, hopefully it will happen!

[dragonimp]

Oh Ed, trying to make everyone else happy and just screwing it all up... now he just has one more difficult conversation to go.

[dumbtastic_duo]

Yeah... At least he had noble intentions!

[anonymous]

We need a chapter where El actually has sex with Mustang. Like full on sex.

[dumbtastic_duo]

Luckily, you get one! :)