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The Limits of Control: a BDSM love story, Chapter 10

Mar 25, 2013 11:49

Title: The Limits of Control: A BDSM love story
Chapter: 10/10!
Word Count: About 78,000
Characters: Roy Mustang, Edward Elric, Alphonse Elric, Winry Rockbell
Rating: M. Mature. Explicit. NC-17. Porn.
Warnings: Serious kinkiness. Pain play, whipping, dominance/submission, bondage. Oh, and a profusion of cursing, though that's going to be the least ( Read more... )

Comments 17

voltricochet March 24 2013, 17:21:09 UTC

Haven't read this last chapter yet,but just posting to say that her fic can still be found here:http://uss-spambot.dreamwidth.org/

You just need to friend her,and she'll add you so you can read her fic^^

Not sure if it's a complete list of her FMA fic,but at least it's something!

On to read your last chapter now :* I've been loving your story so far!

dumbtastic_duo March 24 2013, 17:29:30 UTC

Thanks for your help, but apparently the thing that I forgot to mention was that she evidently isn't friending people there anymore. I friend requested her on that journal in June of last year and left her several messages, and still no dice :(

But thanks for the tip, and I'm so glad you like my story!

voltricochet March 24 2013, 17:50:14 UTC

Aww,I see! D:
I could save her stories and send them to you if you want,since I have access to it.Its not against any rules right?
I know its frustrating when you can't read fic that's locked. ):

dumbtastic_duo March 24 2013, 17:52:42 UTC

I would be /so/ grateful if you would do that for me. Thank you so much! And I don't think it's against any rules, as long as I don't post them anywhere or anything!

Thanks again! <3

Thread 7

amethyst_koneko March 27 2013, 04:59:15 UTC

*sigh* I can't believe this fic is over already! I'm kinda sad to see it go. :( What's a fangirl to do when her fandom is heaving its last dying breaths? dying breaths. *wibbles* Oh how it breaks the heart to see that written. :( Write her own damn fic, that's fucking what. And what a wonderful fic it was! Well written with deliciously hawt sex and angst for days! :) I really liked your Ed voice. The way you write his speech, the way he speaks in fragments (i.e. "Coulda fooled me.") and drops letters from his words (i.e. "No, 's just weird.") is just how I imagine he speaks. :)

Thanks for an awesome fic, I for one appreciate your efforts, and I look forward to that epilogue whenever, if ever, it happens. :)

dumbtastic_duo March 28 2013, 14:36:15 UTC

Aww, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to break anybody's heart!

I'm so glad you liked my fic, though! I'm happy people thought the sex was so hot. I had never written porn before this fic, so I was a little nervous about posting it at all!

And I'm particularly proud of my Ed voice, so I'm happy that you thought it rang true to the real thing :)

The epilogue... Well, about ten pages worth exists in the real world right now. No promises, but I am working on it!

Thanks for reading!

dragonimp March 28 2013, 00:32:48 UTC

What a yummy conclusion! No happily-ever-after, but a we're all-just-muddling-through-as-bes- we-can and we might just be a little better for it. And, of course, the mindblowingly hot and sweet sex :3.

dumbtastic_duo March 28 2013, 14:39:47 UTC

True facts :) Life is way more interesting than happily-ever-afters.

And mind blowing sex is certainly a plus!

Thanks for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed!

straightcogar March 29 2013, 01:50:31 UTC

I FUCKING LOVED EVERY BIT OF THIS!

dumbtastic_duo March 30 2013, 14:39:02 UTC

I'm so glad! :) I'm happy my story merited capslocks! Thanks for letting me know!

anonymous August 31 2013, 15:03:58 UTC

So, this is easily my favorite fan fiction...ever. I can't tell you how many times I have reread this piece of gold. DROOL.

dumbtastic_duo August 31 2013, 15:49:49 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm seriously flattered right now.

Also, since you liked it so much, I'm sure you'll be happy to hear that there is actually a sequel being posted at the moment. I haven't posted it on LJ yet because I haven't wanted to mess with the formatting, but I'm currently posting it on Archive Of Our Own. It's called Impetus ad Hominem, and although it will probably start making its way over to LJ in the next couple of days, in the meantime you can check it out there! :)

Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to let me know how much you liked it!

anonymous September 1 2013, 13:38:39 UTC

Oh, I've found it. >:] Commented on it as starnon. You left me a blubbery mess with that second chapter. It is porn gold.

I reread this fic yesterday so I could properly enjoy the new one...also, because I'll use any excuse to reread this.

I'll be checking Impetus ad Hominem obsessively for updates.

dumbtastic_duo September 1 2013, 20:09:40 UTC

A blubbery mess? XD Excellent! I'm so glad that people seem to have enjoyed it. Also, as for checking obsessively, if you want to do it just becaus you want to reread, then feel free! But you can expect updates no later than every two weeks, and probably exactly two weeks. The fact is that every chapter will require about a week's worth of editing, and in order to keep the story moving forward at the end, I want to have about a week of writing new stuff before posting each chapter. We would rather have that than a bad quality story, right? :)