Kay lives!
My first post in a long while is fic. I'm not sorry. >.>
I finally finished this; I started writing it two years ago for the donation drive that
jpnforph led for Typhoon Haiyan victims, but then things happened.
Title: Kiss Kiss Kiss (×5)
Pairing/group: Team all the pairings! \o/ (Well, Nakamaru/Ueda if you squint)
Rating/warnings: PG-13 (for
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Ok, first of all, each kiss was GREAT. All I need in my life is Nakamaru kissing people and getting kissed. I loved how each time the kiss was casual but it tore meaning through each dynamic. His Kame kiss is sweet and placating and for Nakamaru to go in for a second one when all Kame did was give him a nose kiss (ahhhh that's what you do when your old man is being so cute and forgetful). it was like a trigger and I LOVED THAT
SPEAKING OF TRIGGERS, Junno's laugh earning him a looming Nakamaru. Gosh, it was so brief and fleeting but it had a whole mess of jkdsnfkjsfnkj and sdfnskjfn and I was just clutching my face when he did it.
OK OK BUT BUT KOKI. KAY, KOKI, Not just the mention of piercings but his quick and unapologetic claim of Nakamaru with just the kiss and omg the part where I screamed was when he dropped to his knees, effectively causing me the same reaction Nakamaru had. lol like all my applause for your Koki "just tying his shoes" jesus, ilu ( ... )
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I'm really glad you liked it.
I had a lot of misgivings before finishing, but I'm happy that I did finish it (even if it's not as epic as they deserve). orz
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