Woah! That was a fucked up scene. I loved how the only thing in Dean's mind was "gotta protect the girl." It's like he's channeling his protector instincts for Sammy to Jo.
As for Jo, she's totally messed up at this point. I can't believe she's still functioning. I'm just waiting for her to break down. I think she's long overdue.
Hee! I'm glad you found it 'fucked up' thats what I was going for! :D Without little Sammy, Dean has to take care of someone. <3 Yeah, Jo is just hanging on by a thread. Poor girl. :( Thanks for commenting, hun!
Woah... ...*picks up jaw from floor* . . . Finally I found the time to read this chapter...and what do I find?? The.Best.Breathtaking.Scene. (in the cornfield? Jo and Dean? Awesome!)
Honestly, do you want to kill me with the suspense, the pain, the guilt, the ANGST??
No, it's brilliant, I know I will start to repeat myself, but when it comes to this story, my mind just goes crazy because it's so good. You're getting better and better, I love every sentence.
You are so good with your details and the describtion of the scenes and your style (again, me.fangirl of your.STYLE!) is unique, so unique that you could write whatever you want, I would adore it anyway - but together with this storyline, with the characterisation (sp?), it just kills me *wibbles*. But don't worry, I will hang around long enough to follow your story to the end... ;) Thank you for such an amazing chapter! *big adoring and fangirlish hugs*
First of all, I want to apologize for taking so long to reply! Secondly, wow! Thanks for this comment, totally made my day! :D Awww, so glad you liked the cornfield scene! I had a really vivid image in my mind and I just hope it transfered well into words. Noooo, I don't want to kill you, lol! :) Hehehe it makes me so happy and giggly that you like my style. Thank you for such an amazing comment! *squeezes to death*
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As for Jo, she's totally messed up at this point. I can't believe she's still functioning. I'm just waiting for her to break down. I think she's long overdue.
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Without little Sammy, Dean has to take care of someone. <3
Yeah, Jo is just hanging on by a thread. Poor girl. :(
Thanks for commenting, hun!
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I'm curious where this is going!
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Hopefully I'll have more to post soon. :)
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I guess I should get cracking on writing the next chapter. :)
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...*picks up jaw from floor*
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Finally I found the time to read this chapter...and what do I find??
The.Best.Breathtaking.Scene. (in the cornfield? Jo and Dean? Awesome!)
Honestly, do you want to kill me with the suspense, the pain, the guilt, the ANGST??
No, it's brilliant, I know I will start to repeat myself, but when it comes to this story, my mind just goes crazy because it's so good. You're getting better and better, I love every sentence.
You are so good with your details and the describtion of the scenes and your style (again, me.fangirl of your.STYLE!) is unique, so unique that you could write whatever you want, I would adore it anyway - but together with this storyline, with the characterisation (sp?), it just kills me *wibbles*. But don't worry, I will hang around long enough to follow your story to the end... ;)
Thank you for such an amazing chapter!
*big adoring and fangirlish hugs*
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Secondly, wow! Thanks for this comment, totally made my day! :D
Awww, so glad you liked the cornfield scene! I had a really vivid image in my mind and I just hope it transfered well into words.
Noooo, I don't want to kill you, lol! :)
Hehehe it makes me so happy and giggly that you like my style.
Thank you for such an amazing comment! *squeezes to death*
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