[exo] my first kiss went a little like this

[castleofpearls]

Title: my first kiss went a little like this
Pairing: chanyeol/kyungsoo
Rating: pg
Length: 1.2k
Summary: There is something oddly frightening about waiting for your first kiss to happen (aka first kiss chansoo)
A/N: title should be taken quite literally lol~ thanks jenna for pushing me on and thanks to the nerd for giving me the inspiration to

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[castleofpearls]

FIRST SPOT FOR sleighlay HAPPY EARLY BIRTHDAY JENN I GUESS LMAo

[sleighlay]

THIS IS SO FREAKING CUTE??? LIKE??? HOW???

I love all the little details you put in like the crayon color Kyungsoo's face turned PMSL AND THIS LINE "there was a flicker of something special in Kyungsoo’s heart, something warm settling in his belly whenever he replayed the memory over and over again." WOW YES I LOVE IT

AND CHANYEOL IS A LITTLE SHIT BUT HE IS SO CUTE TEASING KYUNGSOO I mean this is kinda how I see chansoo - chanyeol teasing Soo and Kyungsoo falling for it at first but refusing to put up with his shit after OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GREAAAAT

But chanyeol was all firm with Soo and then tHIS "Gone is the teasing lilt to Chanyeol’s eyes, instead, Chanyeol shines with determination and courage. Behind the fire though, Kyungsoo sees a hint of fragility and tenderness - a look that makes him soften under Chanyeol’s gaze."

UM?!???!!!!!!!

I LOVE YOU!!??!!? THIS IS PERFECTION?!?!!!! WOW I AM AMAZED THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS BECAUSE YEAH

(sorry for the spazzy comment that makes no sense whoops)

[castleofpearls]

I AM KYUNGSOO ;AAAAAAA;

IM SO GLAD U LIKED IT CRIES AND NO IT MADE SENSE IM ALSO VERY SDFLKADUISA CUZ ITS LIKE 11PM BUT THANK U FOR READINg

[castleofpearls]

SPOT FOR deadheartbeats

[deadheartbeats]

FLAPS ARMS EXCESSIVELY HANANANNANANAH CHANSOOO

For once, the park is completely empty of children; there are no screams, no giggles - just silence and the steadily increasing heartbeats of two people. this line is so pretty gfukcving

"Home." Kyungsoo answers primly, picking up the remnants of his dignity and trying to make a dignified exit.

"Don't go," Chanyeol pleads behind him, "I'm sorry, it was a bad joke." i never realized i am do kyungsoo and hECK FUCKING YEAH THATS A BAD JOKE PARK CHANYUR dont mess with peoples first kissu kissus #dick

No way in hell was he gonna do that again. Kyungsoo's eyes dart left and then right, searching for something - anything - that could save him from looking at Chanyeol. i feel u kyungsoo feel u right in the soul

There had been no fireworks, or the electric sparks that he had read about in so many books, but there was still something. His first kiss wasn’t at all what he had expected, but there was a flicker of something special in Kyungsoo’s heart, something warm settling in his belly

[castleofpearls]

love u too jennananana

[moon_things]

HANNAHA

[castleofpearls]

MARCEl

[moon_things]

i needed a minute 2 sit down ok
this is. i. chansoo. lets break it down.

just silence and the steadily increasing heartbeats of two people.
bye bye bybeybeyee

Embarrassment burns into him, ringed with a thick layer of disappointment. Kyungsoo doesn’t really know why he’s so upset; it’s not like Chanyeol had told him he was going to kiss him - maybe it was because he had wanted it so badly, or maybe because for a second, he had thought Chanyeol wanted it too.
MY HEART..... PLS////.....

"....She keeps staring, what is she-”
"Kyungsoo, look at me."
The pads of Chanyeol's fingertips brush gently against Kyungsoo's chin, pushing his face up towards him. Swallowing audibly, Kyungsoo allows himself to look at him.
i'm floating away my weakness is. face touching apparently

Chanyeol noses his way along Kyungsoo's cheekbone before ducking in and pressing his lips carefully - like they were both made of glass - against Kyungsoo's.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! !!!! !!!!!
JB VOICE
I'M ALL GONE

[moon_things]

runs away screaming into the night

[kissesforsehun]

I hope you don't mind me asking, but how did you organize your text so the paragraphs are more compressed? Like there's more white space and it looks neater?

[castleofpearls]

hello-- uhh do you mean like how the fic is like indented compare to other stuff like the a/n and stuff?

I used this code (just get rid of the space between the < and table and it should work) < table width="80%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" border="0" style="margin:0px auto; text-align: justify;"> just after the lj cut code and you can adjust the width (how much of an indent/compressed text you want) using the table width = 80% (eg you want 60% or something) and after when you don't want the indent anymore just < /table> (get rid of the space between < and / so it will work)

uhhhh k hope that was clear and understandable??? im @hingbuns on twitter if you're having problems I'll be glad to help!

[kissesforsehun]

THANK YOU this was really helpful seriously ^^

[seafoamblues]

THAT IS THE CUTEST FUCKING THING IVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SCREECHES
THE CHARACTERIZATION AND DYNAMIC IS PERFECT ITS SO!!!! CHANSOO AND KYUNGSOO IS SO ENDEARING AND OH MY GOD I FELT LIKE I WAS KYUNGSOO?? THE FEELINGS....... KILL ME.
god this is just so cute and perfectly written i want to die omg first kiss feels CHANSOOOOOOO god oh fuck like??? chanyeol Wow and the old lady part and the drama part was perfect v chansoo im just
goodbye im dead im gone like i literally screamed after i finished reading this ok
MY HEART WAS DOKI DOKI IN MY CHEST ISTG
the ending was so sweet too gujhghjhhhhhhhh
god bless u god bless chansoo god bless america

[castleofpearls]

OH MY GOD IM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT? LIKE SAME KYUNGSOO IS ME K I WOULDVE LITERALLY PUNCHED CHANYEOL TBH HE SHOULD BE GLAD HE JUST GOT A FOREHEAD BUMP

I hope ur heart is ok now and I think it was you that mentioned me on twitter (via jenn) I replied but I don't know if you saw v_v but thanks for readingggggg !!!!!

[seafoamblues]

i read that this was based off of your first kiss?? OMO SO CUTE i still haven't had mine yet ;_;

[castleofpearls]

YES IT WAS >////< ((it wasnt very cute when he told me i watched too many dramas IM LITERALLY KYUNGSOO K ahahahah )) awwww dw the kiss will come!

also mind if we become friends i think i followed you on twitter >-