Comments | dutchgotdead: This is fictional, I swear.

dutchgotdead

This is fictional, I swear.

Oct 21, 2003 22:46

I wrote, I'll include it too. But I let my friend Ryan read it. He said it was good, but not good enough to make his jaw drop like my stuff usually does.

Here is that poem:

Do you know that I’ve been watching you ( Read more... )

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backupdork October 21 2003, 20:37:52 UTC

you really think They Move will change the face of hardcore? i'm asking this honestly. you know how we brainiacs like being facetious, so i don't know if you're being sincere. if you are, how so? and, all the "break a leg"s in the world to you, 'cause that would be awesome.

dutchgotdead October 21 2003, 21:54:36 UTC

all my life i've KNOWN that i will impact the world significantly. i think this might be the avenue. i know that my band will release an album and hard music will never be the same after that.

we are working on a new sound. something that's never been done before. and it's really fun. we now have two guitarists. troy from TAW on guitar. we're trying this new weird sound that's like led zep (dirty south rock n roll) meets hard as shit brutal metal with the most eclectic lyrics.

i need to talk with you about something, ben. something fun

backupdork October 22 2003, 04:11:50 UTC

i hope that "something fun" is breakfast. it's 7:11 in the AM, and i have to leave for school in 15 minutes, so you'd better hurry the crap up.

tyfee October 22 2003, 07:14:05 UTC

Wow... The first thing you wrote didn't really catch my attention much, but the second one blew me away. Good job Dutch :)