Now I’ll take this scalpel and cut myself open. Sit in this chair, open my mouth to gather the light to illuminate the stage in my chest. Tonight we’re showing “We Only Reap What We Sew
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"my mom looks right at me, but doesn't see me at all"
*i particularly like this, so true how we can become consumed with emotion so intense that we cannot see clearly how things *really are and what's actually there in front of us
"But this morning both my father and I woke up this morning without a hole in my chest. My mother’s story is different. Since August 8th, she’s been living with a hole in her chest"
*this starts out a little clumsy in how it's worded/written, but i think it is the most poingnent part, the outcome of the situation is almost irrealevant, b/c your mother is already dead on the inside, nice.
but i do hope that all is well with you [all i ever hear is through your occasional writing]
did you ever read through any of the stuff i sent you [i've accumulated so much more since then]?
by the way, i started a new writing project... fellofftheshelf
Wow that line is bad. I was a wreck when I wrote that this morning and that's really evident in that line. i sound like a drunk telling a story. hahahhaa
and i have been reading bits and pieces, but i got confused and then i remembered that i forgot a part so i'm going to re-read it.
but maybe it really is just too erratic and what i wrote is confusing and doesn't make sense... but i like to think that now it makes more sense than it did, b/c i've been able to go back and revisit certain themes/people/etc. we shall see, we shall discuss it another time
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*i particularly like this, so true how we can become consumed with emotion so intense that we cannot see clearly how things *really are and what's actually there in front of us
"But this morning both my father and I woke up this morning without a hole in my chest. My mother’s story is different. Since August 8th, she’s been living with a hole in her chest"
*this starts out a little clumsy in how it's worded/written, but i think it is the most poingnent part, the outcome of the situation is almost irrealevant, b/c your mother is already dead on the inside, nice.
but i do hope that all is well with you [all i ever hear is through your occasional writing]
did you ever read through any of the stuff i sent you [i've accumulated so much more since then]?
by the way, i started a new writing project... fellofftheshelf
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and i have been reading bits and pieces, but i got confused and then i remembered that i forgot a part so i'm going to re-read it.
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utterly fantastic.
you amaze me.
really, you do.
♥
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hopefully the stage is set with more closure next performance...
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