Part one of a new short story I'm writing.

[dutchgotdead]

Almost anything can be used to end someone’s life, especially your own; considering there’d be no struggle or resistance. Here I am staring at this ball-point pen, trying to figure which crucial part of my body I should thrust it into. If only I had my sister’s flexibility. I can remember her eating cereal in the morning on the floor while we

Comments

[vorspier]

wonderful...
quirky... easy to read yet intelligent... entertaining...
i didnt know the power of your writing until now...

hey...

[imurpamphleteer]

i really enjoy reading what you write. i thinks it's really good.

[lemmal]

dude, sweet.

the style of this sort of reminds me of chuck's. but you've added your own adorable flair to it.

speaking of chuck, morgan is reading invisible monsters and positively loving it. once she's done i'm letting her borrow choke.

anyhow, you're my dream boy.

[dutchgotdead]

you ever notice how things that were once mine suddenly become your's? like Choke, the pax cecilia cd, my heart.

AWE!!!

[dutchgotdead]

damn. . . "your's" should be a word.

[vorspier]

you just cheapened the whole thing with the last line.. take it off dutch.. take it all off

[dutchgotdead]

It's not the last line, dipshit! It's the bridge to the next part.