Listen up faggots. . .

[dutchgotdead]

I started my short story, my one that I started before and wasn't happy with. Now I'm happy with it thus far. Give me some constructive criticism and negative feedback.

The forest; damp and quiet, but when isn’t it? And my legs hurt terribly as I trudge along this path, but when don’t they? The path. The forest. The journey itself.

Comments

[frozen_memories]

I liked the first short story you came up with. However, this one seems much more complex. This story also stuns my mind. I love your style. You amaze me more with every new writing. Kepp up the good work, Dutch. You're one of the best.

[ifandonlyif]

hello dutch.