pointless ramblings, musings, charades

Nov 11, 2007 14:07

clearly, it needs some editting, especially the sentence that starts with "such stubborn stupidity"... that one is wack-ish. too many word repeats/similar words as well. also, i need to do a lot more punctuating and capitalizing. but yeah, here it is in the raw ( Read more... )

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x_bag_x November 11 2007, 23:33:02 UTC
the rhetoric is headache-making.
but that's probably what you're going for.

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dwayne_hoover November 11 2007, 23:43:50 UTC
"Such stubborn stupidity is set stuck on his repetitive fate"
it is, indeed, part of the point

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smartpatrol89 November 12 2007, 10:04:30 UTC
clean up your pasta dishes and shiiiiitssssss.

just cuz you are gonna get $50,000 doesnt mean that you have a maid yet.

;)

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dwayne_hoover November 14 2007, 04:15:48 UTC
you must realize that the dishes were clean long before i read this on here, don't you?

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jazzman554 November 13 2007, 08:24:35 UTC
ever seen idiocracy?

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dwayne_hoover November 14 2007, 04:15:17 UTC
nope

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