Ooh, this was excellent but so very frightening. I'll have nightmares of Missy as well O.o
I'd love it if Missy had planned her own demise. Poor Osgood, would hate to think this is what happened to her. (Apart from the kissing Missy part, because don't we all dream about that?)
A+ for Clara's horrifying dream. Very cinematic, with characters blending into each other. (Do you believe in the 'Clara's pregnant' theory/rumour? I hate pregnancy plots with a passion, especially if it's a clumsy way of getting rid of her...)
Favourite bits:
Most frightening of all, Missy's loving stranglehold about Osgood's neck: first the sweet talk, then the spider's bite. ** Then, like a harridan out of a warped Disney nightmare, Julie Andrews gone horribly wrong, Missy descending from on high, umbrella completing her grand entrance. ** Osgood opened her eyes. Tears flecked on what she presumed were pale avatar cheeks. She welcomed the coming moment, of hell fading. The screen had long since faded away, the white room now fading in a dizzy blur, pin
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Sorry for the eleventh hour reply... USA TOMORROW!
I scared myself with this one :/ I do love writing Missy though. Michelle Gomez = new girl crush.
Apart from the kissing Missy part, because don't we all dream about that?
There are actually people who don't like Michelle's Master. Poor blind fools. Missy could have her way with me any time. So hot.
I had fun with Clara's dream... so many subliminal messages. As usual this fic isn't popular on ff.net coz I always pull weird shit in my fic's on my poor unsuspecting readers. NO PORN FOR YOU. I've had a gazillion favorites but not a single review but yours XD
It's fun to go back and read my earlier Lucy/Master fic's and see where my writing has ended up. I do think I write much better now. However, I'm not sure that I got this one right. I'm not sure that the story is finished... hate that feeling.
ps: frantically typing up my crime story now to email you...
Haha someone posted a poster of Mary Poppins with Missy as Mary and captioned it, 'imagine the children's day.' I am so writing Mary Poppins/Missy crossover now!
Oh, wow! That was excellent! Your dialogue is fantastic. The short descriptive sentences worked nicely in between the various encounters. I loved the transition from Clara thinking she is talking to Eleven to being terrorized by Missy. Just wonderful voices throughout! I love the twisted ones.
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I'd love it if Missy had planned her own demise. Poor Osgood, would hate to think this is what happened to her. (Apart from the kissing Missy part, because don't we all dream about that?)
A+ for Clara's horrifying dream. Very cinematic, with characters blending into each other. (Do you believe in the 'Clara's pregnant' theory/rumour? I hate pregnancy plots with a passion, especially if it's a clumsy way of getting rid of her...)
Favourite bits:
Most frightening of all, Missy's loving stranglehold about Osgood's neck: first the sweet talk, then the spider's bite.
**
Then, like a harridan out of a warped Disney nightmare, Julie Andrews gone horribly wrong, Missy descending from on high, umbrella completing her grand entrance.
**
Osgood opened her eyes. Tears flecked on what she presumed were pale avatar cheeks. She welcomed the coming moment, of hell fading. The screen had long since faded away, the white room now fading in a dizzy blur, pin ( ... )
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I scared myself with this one :/ I do love writing Missy though. Michelle Gomez = new girl crush.
Apart from the kissing Missy part, because don't we all dream about that?
There are actually people who don't like Michelle's Master. Poor blind fools. Missy could have her way with me any time. So hot.
I had fun with Clara's dream... so many subliminal messages. As usual this fic isn't popular on ff.net coz I always pull weird shit in my fic's on my poor unsuspecting readers. NO PORN FOR YOU. I've had a gazillion favorites but not a single review but yours XD
It's fun to go back and read my earlier Lucy/Master fic's and see where my writing has ended up. I do think I write much better now. However, I'm not sure that I got this one right. I'm not sure that the story is finished... hate that feeling.
ps: frantically typing up my crime story now to email you...
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Your dialogue is fantastic.
The short descriptive sentences worked nicely in between the various encounters. I loved the transition from Clara thinking she is talking to Eleven to being terrorized by Missy. Just wonderful voices throughout! I love the twisted ones.
I can't wait til Fall. :)
I'm on DW too: https://ivybellis.dreamwidth.org/
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