Series 4 and 3/4 Ficisode 2: Day of the Dellians

[msqu]

Series 4 and 3/4: Ficisode #02
Title: Day of the Dellians
Writers: msqu
Characters: Ten, Donna, Wilf
Rating: G
Word Count: 6,200
Summary: A quiet visit to Leighton House turns into an unexpected adventure when the Doctor and his friends are captured. Trouble always finds the Doctor, and this time it's something that's escaped his notice for years,

Comments

[tanuha]

Thanks, it was interesting! Loved Wilf taking them to their local adventure and lovely Zea. Her interspecies research may come handy :o)

[msqu]

Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it!

[luinel]

Uh, so... that's it? The Doctor doesn't sort the bad guys out? How long is K-9 going to keep the shield up? Isn't Sarah Jane going to wonder what happened to K-9?

[piartemis18]

Yeah, there's something that confused me a little too -- why did we have to hide the whole earth? Were the Dellians likely to attack the Earth? And if they still had the tracking device on the ship, wouldn't the Dellians be able to find it anyway?

But besides all that, I really enjoyed the pace of this part. Love the dialogue, and the characterization, and K9 saving the day. Woohoo.

I would probably like just a little more resolution about the Dellians too. It seems just a tad glib to say "We wait until they pass by" when they're so dangerous.

But whatever. It was still fun.