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[dwolf34]

Hello again out there! I had someone ask about my versatility of writing and POV, and I know there's a small market out there for BDSM smut. So I thought I'd post this little scene I wrote for your pleasure (and because I'd like some feedback on it

Comments

[bobpet]

very interesting good story line.
can't wait to see what happens next

[dwolf34]

It's not finished, but there is a good chunk more. It switches POV between Katherine and Josh. And has a heck of a lot more plot than this... I think. LOL!

[artistwife]

Nice to see you back writing. Glad you are feeling good enough for this. Good story. Looking forward to more plot and polish.

[dwolf34]

Thank you! I'd like to confirm that I'm writing again, but actually I'm not. That was an older piece. But sometimes, talking about writing is a good motivator for doing some more writing.

[freekydj]

I'm no BDSM expert, so I don't know how well this comes across for those who know it. That said, I felt this was an excellent little peak/teaser for the longer story. Makes you wonder about how Amanda& Kate's got to the point of receiving Josh as a "gift". I would certinly be interested in the develoment of Kate & Josh's relationship. It caught me up with Kate so obviously wanting to please Amanda even though she was the one "in charge". Very intriging even without the smutty parts. That is something you don't always see.

[dwolf34]

Thank you! While I'd love to hear comments from someone who is in the scene, you've let me know that the plot is coming through the smut. Since smut sometimes seems to overtake my plots, that's very good to know.

I'm glad you found it intriguing, and even happier that you took the time to give me the feedback I needed for the piece. Thanks again!